Reviews for Janie and the Cretin
reader chapter 6 . 7/18/2006
Good Story. The little kids are cute and horrible all at the same time, good going there. Janie and Mike's relationship is great. I can't wait for more, especially the rest of the dinner. And the little side of Kate and Gavin is a good touch. Keep up the good writing!
Mrdarcylover chapter 6 . 7/18/2006
I really liked this chapter, the end was good. I hope you update soon!
jinx chapter 6 . 7/18/2006
coolio! keep it up!
ALY55A chapter 6 . 7/18/2006
love this story! aww feel so bad for mike! hope you update soon!
elisefey chapter 5 . 7/15/2006
Very cute story. I want to see how Mike tries to redeem himself in Janie’s eyes.
insane in the brain chapter 5 . 7/12/2006
Oh, I love her little quirk, how she's scared of Lobsters xD
n-who-says chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
seems like a very very good story. i love the nicknames. very orignial. thanks for your review!
pfeiffer chapter 4 . 7/4/2006
OH MY GOD!the last chapter was great...

so are you intending to have a love triangle here?

please update soon

gorgeous806 chapter 4 . 6/26/2006
This story's great! i can't wait to see what happens next. update quickly, please
lene chapter 4 . 6/26/2006
please update soon i want to know how janie reacts to mike being there and what happens next keep my eyes open and keep reviewing as much as i can
DeathOfTheGraveyard chapter 3 . 6/24/2006
Ad Hector chapter 3 . 6/23/2006
hhehehe. nakilig ko.
Ms.Romantic chapter 3 . 6/22/2006
Lene-pooh chapter 3 . 6/22/2006
Please update soon i like this story and i want to know what happens when mike comes back from college
Natajaaay chapter 2 . 6/18/2006
hey! this is a pretty gd story so far! i read the first chapter and there were a few grammar mistakes but in the second one there aren't nearly as many... lala? u get called lala? wats ur real name then? sorry, i'm nosy, but, alas, i can't help it *sighs*. anyway, gr8 story and fantastic i wonder who the cretin is...
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