Reviews for Janie and the Cretin |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm very curious about how this one goes. Please update soon. Like maybe while V*nt*v* is down? Hehehehe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, no! That's so sad! He's laughing at her! Jeez, that's mean! What a jerk! Please update! |
![]() ![]() Great first chapter. I felt so bad for Janie when Lala showed up at the end. Ugh! I just know that poor Janie will be embarassed to no end by that wench! I hope Mike or Rocker stand up for Janie since she is their friend. I would love to know more about the characters, but I guess that will come as the story develops. Again great first chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this story, it's a great start. I hope you update soon! I really want to see where you go with this! |