Reviews for Janie and the Cretin
Froglover4444 chapter 8 . 4/30/2009
Why do you keep spelling Johnny's name wrong. You spell it Jhonny. Besides that and a lot of grammar/spelling errors and leaving words out it's a great story. Please don't be mad it's just some constructive criticism.
ess3sandra chapter 9 . 3/30/2009
they will have beatiful children together.
ess3sandra chapter 8 . 3/30/2009
hell yes, interaction is on its way. i like it!
ess3sandra chapter 7 . 3/30/2009
how come she doesnt get that her cretin wants her back? i want more interatcion between them!
ess3sandra chapter 6 . 3/30/2009
well, ive heard that UCLA is supposed to be good so im saying why not, and it is across the entire country from mike so i know why she wants to go there, i would to...
ess3sandra chapter 5 . 3/30/2009
hehe, he was a little monster, and now hes a hot man, you need to describe him in his 20 year old glory!
ess3sandra chapter 4 . 3/30/2009
yes, hes back. and its a three way romance, and make waants her, and maybe gavin too, oh this is going to be great!
ess3sandra chapter 3 . 3/30/2009
trip down memorial lane. nice. i think that janie need another man and mike needs some competition...
ess3sandra chapter 2 . 3/30/2009
jesus, thats hilarious, i want that mean when i was a child, but they seem to enjoy themselves. im looking forward to see the interaction between janie and her cretin in the next chaapter, or maybe the lack of it if janie has her way...
ess3sandra chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
shit, shes only 14 and the teletubby is singling her out, damn. but seriously, to name a person lala, talk about zero imagination. im guessing next chapter will be bad, as in janie will be thorn to pieces...
EchoedShadows chapter 21 . 1/27/2009
Wonderful story! Can't wait to check out all your other ones!
intercostalspace chapter 21 . 1/19/2009
very nice fic. thank you very much! :D
Yellow.Jellow chapter 21 . 11/27/2008
hilarious! i love nat and jhonny, they are adorable! I couldnt stop reading but I think the epilogue was unnecessary, if anything, it kinda ruined the story for me. I always thought the point of an epilogue was for closure, to close up any loose ends, and so on. I though the story would have been just fine if you had ended at chapter 20.

Well, I was a little curious as to why it would have taken them 3 years, after all, they do live next to each other and im sure Mike comes home all the time.
Booklover91 chapter 14 . 11/4/2008
This is the first time anyone has disci[lined Nat and Johnny, if i were them i owuld have gotten a butt load of spankings, lol. but i guess diff. ppl have diff. ways of discipline.

anyways, the last part of this chapter, was so sweet. i was "aw" ]
Booklover91 chapter 11 . 11/4/2008
AW, he was sleeping with her diary in his hand :)

How sweet. Janie is so mean, and she hurt his felings, i feel bad for Mike :(
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