i love this story so much you dont know

you are great

love this story so much...i thnk i red it at least 7y timess...i love this story and want to say that i think i red over 200 stories on facebook(no joke) and this is one of my fav. so cont with all this good work

Aw, the story was amazing. I really loved it. I immediately liked the characters (well, okay, the Cretin maybe not, but later on I very much did) and your writing style was awesome.

I enjoyed reading it very much.

Well done.

LOVE IT

I ABSOLUTELY loved this story! Very fun, humorous and entertaining! It's very original! It may be a cliche but the way you wrote it is original. :D It's also a plus for you that you didn't drag out the story like how other writers do it. There were some errors, spelling, grammar and the like. But I guess you can always clear that up if you edit it or something. But, it'll still be awesome even if you don't edit it. ANYHOW, happy writing! and God Bless!

PS Love his nickname, VERY original... "cretin"

Really nice story, which I absolutely loved reading :D.

i realy love this story. i think i red it at least three times. i think tgat it is an amazing plot and that the character are very good. you hsould continue writing and maybe also write another story ...

hey the story is realy good and i just love those 2 kids that love to cause mischief! hopefully you can even do a story about them caus by the looks of things i bet they end up like their older siblings!

loved it. keep on writing.

I finished reading this story with a smile. Its so sweet.

this is good

HOW IS IT POSSIBLE YOU ONLY HAVE 300 SOMETHING REVIEWS? Granted I only found this story after it was finished, but it was such an entertaining story ot read. It had a bit of everything I love in a story. Fluff, drama, humor, basically: everything. And I loved every part of it. Thank you for writing such a great story! (:

kool story great ending

so good! mike was a real butt though when he found out that janie liked him, and i luv janie's personality