Reviews for Janie and the Cretin
as chapter 21 . 4/24/2008
i love this story so much you dont know
ad chapter 21 . 4/24/2008
you are great
gj chapter 21 . 4/24/2008
love this story so much...i thnk i red it at least 7y timess...i love this story and want to say that i think i red over 200 stories on facebook(no joke) and this is one of my fav. so cont with all this good work
Channah chapter 21 . 4/24/2008
Aw, the story was amazing. I really loved it. I immediately liked the characters (well, okay, the Cretin maybe not, but later on I very much did) and your writing style was awesome.

I enjoyed reading it very much.

Well done.
faithful.dream chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
anitsirK chapter 21 . 3/9/2008
I ABSOLUTELY loved this story! Very fun, humorous and entertaining! It's very original! It may be a cliche but the way you wrote it is original. :D It's also a plus for you that you didn't drag out the story like how other writers do it. There were some errors, spelling, grammar and the like. But I guess you can always clear that up if you edit it or something. But, it'll still be awesome even if you don't edit it. ANYHOW, happy writing! and God Bless!

PS Love his nickname, VERY original... "cretin"
ghepardo chapter 21 . 3/8/2008
Really nice story, which I absolutely loved reading :D.
s chapter 21 . 3/7/2008
i realy love this story. i think i red it at least three times. i think tgat it is an amazing plot and that the character are very good. you hsould continue writing and maybe also write another story ...
dj-baker chapter 21 . 2/22/2008
hey the story is realy good and i just love those 2 kids that love to cause mischief! hopefully you can even do a story about them caus by the looks of things i bet they end up like their older siblings!
Genato chapter 21 . 2/17/2008
loved it. keep on writing.
kingrankar76 chapter 21 . 1/21/2008
I finished reading this story with a smile. Its so sweet.
outsidersgirl chapter 2 . 12/18/2007
this is good
xjo orange chapter 21 . 11/25/2007
HOW IS IT POSSIBLE YOU ONLY HAVE 300 SOMETHING REVIEWS? Granted I only found this story after it was finished, but it was such an entertaining story ot read. It had a bit of everything I love in a story. Fluff, drama, humor, basically: everything. And I loved every part of it. Thank you for writing such a great story! (:
PeterMoore chapter 21 . 11/9/2007
kool story great ending
PeterMoore chapter 5 . 11/8/2007
so good! mike was a real butt though when he found out that janie liked him, and i luv janie's personality
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