| Reviews for Janie and the Cretin |
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   MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 21 . 10/22/2007 Hehe, sweet epilogue :) |
| First Time Around chapter 21 . 10/20/2007 I love this story...you have no idea. Such connection, it's amazing. Your a great writer... |
| LoVe4always chapter 21 . 10/20/2007 Aww... This story is so sweet. I loved it! I have one question though, Did we ever get to see what Mike wrote in her diary? |
| Inkbl0t chapter 14 . 9/15/2007 *takes a deep breath* OMG. OMG. OMG. That-was so-BEAUTIFUL. I have decided that even if there were more grammatical errors I would have liked (we're human, after all), I have decided here and now that this fic, "Janie and the Cretin", is one of my favorite stories. Thank you for writing this. |
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 20 . 8/28/2007 Yay, happy endings! |
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 19 . 8/28/2007 Double-ouch, renting out the room! |
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 18 . 8/28/2007 Ouch... |
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 14 . 8/28/2007 Aw, giggles with cheesy delight. |
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 12 . 8/28/2007 LOL, his elbow honked the horn! Good stuff... |
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 11 . 8/28/2007 Aw, the diary :) |
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 7 . 8/28/2007 I sense a catfight once Peaches finds out about her fellow cheerleader and her "man" [grimace]. |
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 6 . 8/28/2007 Why, oh why, did you pick UCLA. If you want the best, you have to pick USC, duh... ;) "Fight on Trojans!" :D |
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 4 . 8/28/2007 Nat is so adorable! |
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 3 . 8/28/2007 It's a good read, very well written. I almost hate to bring this up, but it's such a small thing that mars it's perfection. Towards the end, you used "raise", and did you mean "race"? Otherwise, no critique on my end :D |
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 1 . 8/28/2007 Oh, that's like a girls worst nightmare! Good setup. |