|Reviews for Janie and the Cretin|
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 21 . 10/22/2007
Hehe, sweet epilogue :)
| First Time Around chapter 21 . 10/20/2007
I love this story...you have no idea. Such connection, it's amazing. Your a great writer...
| LoVe4always chapter 21 . 10/20/2007
Aww... This story is so sweet. I loved it! I have one question though, Did we ever get to see what Mike wrote in her diary?
| Inkbl0t chapter 14 . 9/15/2007
*takes a deep breath* OMG. OMG. OMG.
I have decided that even if there were more grammatical errors I would have liked (we're human, after all), I have decided here and now that this fic, "Janie and the Cretin", is one of my favorite stories.
Thank you for writing this.
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 20 . 8/28/2007
Yay, happy endings!
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 19 . 8/28/2007
Double-ouch, renting out the room!
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 18 . 8/28/2007
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 14 . 8/28/2007
Aw, giggles with cheesy delight.
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 12 . 8/28/2007
LOL, his elbow honked the horn! Good stuff...
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 11 . 8/28/2007
Aw, the diary :)
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 7 . 8/28/2007
I sense a catfight once Peaches finds out about her fellow cheerleader and her "man" [grimace].
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 6 . 8/28/2007
Why, oh why, did you pick UCLA. If you want the best, you have to pick USC, duh... ;) "Fight on Trojans!" :D
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 4 . 8/28/2007
Nat is so adorable!
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 3 . 8/28/2007
It's a good read, very well written. I almost hate to bring this up, but it's such a small thing that mars it's perfection. Towards the end, you used "raise", and did you mean "race"? Otherwise, no critique on my end :D
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
Oh, that's like a girls worst nightmare! Good setup.