Reviews for Janie and the Cretin |
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![]() ![]() loved it! the only thing i have to say though is that the summary didn't really tell me what the story was going to be about...maybe it was just me...but I LOVED IT! D |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! I'm glad i took the time to read it. Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I randomly starting laughing once I finished and my friend thinks I'm crazy. LMFAO. Good job. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() very dramatic. :) there were some grammer errors, but it was still good. :D |
![]() ![]() ...I wanted to know what he added in the diary though... *pout pout* Great story tho D |
![]() ![]() ![]() geez even ur ending is like perfection... i can't even criticize u! ok well it's a good thing. for u at least;) keep on writing. love ya. bye. *sign off on the last review for this story (LOL) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i guess since he was a star that he could go to prom with her.. so what did he write? did u let people find out? |
![]() ![]() ![]() what!so he's seriously giving up... i still don't get what made him so pissed. what if she rented the room ;) swet hahah ya im crazy a little... anyways i love this. don't know what else to say. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg... geez talk about breaking her heart. it's breaking mine.. he's going to the extremes... not seriously though. well there are 3 more left.. cant wait! |
![]() ![]() ![]() god i love the little monsters. oh i wish that all cheer leaders are like those... i wouldn't want them to squeal all the time though.. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL i am totally serious. this is hilarious! my works can't compare to urs but i would love it if u read some of them. thsi is cool and great! gosh i need to read some of ur other works ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha how romantic. love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() god that makes me wanna cry. but how does she leave a space for him... ok well i know how but... well hard to explain my thinking ;) good chapter. incredibly touching. especially what mike said. |
![]() ![]() ![]() a prom date! so it's back to that. jesus i would've never thought. ur seriously good at this. a genius. sweet. i love ur plot. gotta go and tell friends about this piece of work ;) |