Reviews for Janie and the Cretin
Ski Bird chapter 12 . 6/15/2007
hahha well that makes it more realistic.

really nice and funny. i love it when it's funny ;)
Ski Bird chapter 11 . 6/15/2007
OMG.. u seriously are good with these twists...

god i love this ;)

maybe college is better than high school..

i've always wondered.
Ski Bird chapter 10 . 6/15/2007

soo sweet. she's totally right about her theory on u know what.

ok well so do u like NYU better?

and where do they live? so the only reason mike wanted to go there was because her..interesting.

i hope that i have fun roommates like that when i go to college.
Ski Bird chapter 9 . 6/15/2007
ah so he's happy that he likes KATE.

hahahaha. really good. can't wait too c what happens ;)
Ski Bird chapter 8 . 6/15/2007
faint because he smiled?

isn't that a little to dramatic?

really really good. she actually has a jealous.
Ski Bird chapter 7 . 6/15/2007
i really like it ;)
Ski Bird chapter 6 . 6/15/2007
yup UCLA rocks. but i like duke to. i live in NC ;)

really really good. why do the parents oppose it so much. and i thought that they would stop playing matchmaker already. i feel sorry for jhonny and nat...
Ski Bird chapter 5 . 6/15/2007
so did mike change?

when did he start liking her..

he should've known better than to laugh at her that day... or was there some other reason.. so she knows that he likes her?

is she pretty and lots of guys like her or is she the geeky type? sorry about the questions. i'm curious about this girl's outer appearance.
Ski Bird chapter 4 . 6/15/2007

gavin is really nice... well if he's not acting that is.

so from the summary i assume that she's gonna be with mike but y not gavin?

i guess that i'll have to read on and find out huh?

;) really nice.
Ski Bird chapter 3 . 6/15/2007
ok this is great! so original.

so why did mike ask?

and how did it become a tradition.. do they want her to say yes?

or is it just like a requirement...

really nice. creative ;)
Ski Bird chapter 2 . 6/15/2007
geez ur lala.

right... i'm a little freaked but why?

normally people would want to be good in the story. well at least not that bad. but no offense i have nothing i repeat nothing against it ;)

thanks for clarifying everything. but i'm still a little confused..

when was it that they read her diary?
Ski Bird chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
OMG! no other way to describe...

really nice first chapter.
ophelia chapter 21 . 5/27/2007
i luved ur storyy...wats funny is that movie "a walk to remember"..i balled like a baby because of shane west...and my cousins still make fun of me for it even though it happened a very long time ago...anyway cute storyy...makes me hope for a guy like cretin..hehe mike
ihrtbks chapter 21 . 5/15/2007
That was really sweet, especially the line about him "being faithful to a girl who wasn't even his girlfriend." I want a Mike/cretin now.

If you want a sequel, you should do a story about Nat and Jhonny. That'd be really cute, please?

AJS chapter 21 . 4/10/2007
Aww yay! This is so cute ah :D Haha. I love how she still calls him the cretin in her mind, even after all these years of being married ;) I was extremely hooked since your prologue - it was very effective in hooking the reader because even from there strings were pulling my heart when Mike completely rejected her. Oh wow. Haha Mike. That took me a while to pull that name from my memory :p They're unbelievably cute though, and it's insanely cute to see the same thing happening with Jhonny & Natalie again :D Hehe. I also like the last sentence.

I think that if you did a sequel, it'd be cool if either you did Natalie & Jhonny or Mike & Janie's kids or something. I really enjoyed this :) Uber uber cute! It makes me rethink my decision to overlook NYU when applying... hm :x

Anyways yeah, I love this :D Keep up the good work! I'll try and check out some of your other works as well.

- Alyssa
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