|Reviews for Janie and the Cretin|
| Oyuki chapter 21 . 3/22/2007
this was totally awesome! *squeal* it took me a while to read it (i should really be rading my textbook), but it was worth it. yay!
| Chaotic -Tragedy chapter 21 . 3/3/2007
Oh my god... i just spent the last...eight hours reading this. Lol I'm such a loser but it was so good!
But i really recommend not doing a sequel because they're usually never as good as the first ones, and i say this as an experienced writer myself having attempted many books.
But yes, i love this! Amazing.
| youpin chapter 21 . 1/31/2007
I ADORE THIS STORY.
| Highlands chapter 21 . 1/25/2007
Love this story! totally wonderful. however, i wonder what was written by the cretin in janie's notebook...
| Highlands chapter 10 . 1/25/2007
hi i dont understand why is is the gay roommate called creamy... help?
| eliza-smiles chapter 21 . 1/15/2007
..wonderful...bloody wonderful... i really enjoyed what you have v\created and cannot wait until i check out some more of your work. i love natalie and johnny when they were little, i mean how cute and adorable could they get? that and their little plans and ideas were brilliant... cheers
| Kaede Kitsurani chapter 21 . 1/15/2007
Aw, cute. ) I love it.
| artistic dreamer chapter 21 . 1/6/2007
OMG! that story was so cute and romantic! it was like the perfect fairytale ending! write a sequel or something, i loved it!
| clear vision chapter 21 . 12/28/2006
| unconnected14 chapter 21 . 12/26/2006
Aw. That was such a cute story. I loved it. You are an amazing writer.
| Linra chapter 21 . 12/19/2006
i. LOVE. IT.
i espeically love the way i saw the way your writing style changed. -thumbs up- i don't see that very often and your style changed and improved, making me want to read more and more.
| pixxie chapter 14 . 12/19/2006
OMFG that is so damn cute! i swear im jumping in my seat! damn. -squeals- at first i was a bit hesitant to read this but it's. so. damn. CUTE. they're so cute.
gawd, i need to expand my vocabulary.
| funsize chapter 21 . 12/5/2006
omigod what a fantabulous ending! this has been such an awesum stroy omg.. write a sequel.. or something.. i duno.. but ur such a good writer please keep going with something like it?
| hopelessromantic42 chapter 21 . 12/3/2006
good story! bc of this i was not able to do my hw (i have a test lmao) BUT ANYWAYS you really should do a sequel to Natalie and Jhonny and like in his piont of view. that would be awesome and it would be diffrent because its the guys point of view.
well thats what i think i dunno?
i would like that alot
i would have posted up review for vey chapter but i was into the story i kinda forgot _ lmao
| JusticeWriter chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
One of the best srories I've ever read on here. Good job.