NOOOOOO! CROSSE! ;-;

You really really are one of the best writers. I seriosly like, no love your stories.

AMAZING! the story and plot were incredible it made me laugh and cry so thank you!

supppper ...i really love fists & lipstickz guyyyyzzzz

I LOVE this story! U ought to get it published! It'll be an awesome hit!

Just that chapter hooked me. U R very good at writing! And just after this chapter I will favorite this story:). "I LOVE THIS!" Juliette smiled. This was hard-ball. Because that's what reading such a great story is; hard-ball:)
LAter

Y U NO BRING THE GIRL IN ALREADY!

*le gasp* Just what ive been looking foor!

awwwwwww.. this is sweeeeet. :'

I was drawn into your story. The characters and plot were well delivered, excellent job. It took me a month to read through all of this (lol) but I enjoyed every minute of this work of art. I will be reading FAL2 very soon; I can't wait to find out what happens next :)!

Is it bad that because of this story, erm manga, that I started reading OTHER manga and judge them based on this? And that I can't find published work that I think is better than this?

I'm a Fanfiction authoress, and I also write on here, but I was too lazy to sign in. I'll be reading your other stories now.

Your personal fan,

Padfoot.

This is an amazing story. I can't tell you how many times I've read it, and the sequel.

The plot just. . .pulls me in and I can't escape.

I don't get how this hasn't gotten published in real life yet.

Wonderful story. I have to say, it reads just like an anime, and I'd love to see it in coloured, moving form. Have you considered bringing it to a TV producer to work with an artist and turn it into an actual anime series?

OMG I love your writing. If this ever gets released as a book, and in the U.S. I will most definitely be one of the first to buy it. You have some major skills. This story made me cry, which most stories cannot do. I was able to actually immerse myself in your writing. Honestly, I think if you wanted, you would have a career in writing. I know I'm not the only one that would feel this way.

Angel

Excellent manga storyline. A well thought out mystery. My only complaint is that I feel you killed off too many characters at the end if the book too suddenly. I think drawing out the murders over the course if the story would have had a better effect. Still, splendid work. You should be very proud.