Reviews for Self inflicted
The Jynx of Kari chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
Geez, I'm the latest reviewer. I should feel special. lol. IDk, maybe you'll read this and maybe you won't. MAybe you're not on ficpress and maybe you still are. Who knows? Well i don't. I just like to say that it was terrorizingly powerful to me. Each line struck me pretty hard, leaving me breathless. I loved it.

_Kari
astral boy chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
yes, very nice indeed. loved the way 'papercut' and 'up' kinda rhymed... do you put music to these songs? They'd sound great.
Sadira chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
Wow! This is SO powerful. Really impressively and expressively written. Keep it up.
Jezsh chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
personally, I think beginning of this piece is a little bit clumsy, but as it goes on it really gathers momentum and focus, and I really like the descriptions and sort of breathless in-denial-but-not-quite quality to it. And the line about kisses like sponge...oh I like that.