Reviews for Toothlessku
Travis C. Eckert chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
Kind of weird metaphor you have at end, though I am sure that is how it felt.
wildwolffree17 chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
I've felt like that. Well done.
Ultimate Schuyler chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
Lol. I liked the way you wording this haiku, with "home" and "exploring" and "chewing". It was awesome.
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
Its cool how you took a kinda mundane (abeit painful) event and turned it into this broody haiku. Thankfully, I've never had any teeth pulled.

Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
Reminds me of when I had to get my wisdom teeth pulled, I have tough teeth, I think they had to take a crowbar to them. Needless to say I was in a lot of pain. Keep up the good work.

elvenstorm chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
Well thats certainly a different subject to choose, like reading original poetry. Simple and well written, keep it up x