Reviews for Liberty |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, this starts wonderfully. I came upon your story because you are a favorite author of CorvaCarolina who wrote a story that was a favorite of Aurette. I look forward to reading more, thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter I hope Sara and Ryan get back together |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter can't wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great started really liking your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() very blue smoke-ish. i really like the book so i enjoyed this as well. just that when u replaced brianna's name with bianca(which was the name of reena's mother in blue smoke) that i felt this story will stll be good even without the too much blue smoke familiar scenes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You say that Sara and Shane are overachievers, but I'm curious - what has Shane done to make him an "overachiever"? We've only seen him mentioned in passing. Also, I can't tell how old he is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like your story so far. My only suggestion is that Sara's accomplishments don't add up for her age. It takes a long time to make movies and CDs, along with the amount of promotion necessary for both, so she couldn't feasibly achieve all of that in such a short period of time. Ryan is 27, so I'd say if she was 25, that would make more sense than 22. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great story! Love the ending! I'm gonna go read the sequel now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool, she bought a house! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well...at least she tried |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm interested to know what happened between Sarah and Ryan...Oh, and can you please check out and review my stories? It would mean the world to me! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great idea! at first I thought it was steve for sure,or mabey even ryan. but that,that was pure brilliance...really I never would have guessed that |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay... totally didn't see Dan as the stalker/scary dude! Way to go with the suspense! I loved every second of this story and I will be reading Hollywood shortly! Love it! xoxo jennie |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH NO! What the crap? Now I have no clue... okay- gotta go read! xoxo jennie |