Reviews for Liberty |
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![]() ![]() ![]() heyyo! i LOVE this story big time man! i wanan see em together, long run. kids and all tehehe! seriously the story is by far one of my favoruites! your doing a fantatsic job! and im lookin on ur lj.. tehehe cause lj kicks ass |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! The characters have a lot of chemistry and the love scenes are quite hot! Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You say that so nonchalantly 'they were too busy having hot sex...' But I can see that. She does have a big house. At least Mr/Mrs. Stalker person isn't in this chapter. Which probably means, they'll be popping up next chapter. Great job though. Take care! Aqua |
![]() ![]() ![]() fantatsic as always! Your doing a great jobin keeping the two stroies seperate! any more news on the stalker? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry haven't reviewed in a while, been busy with work. Love it as always! It's coming out beautifuly, Sara's emotions were wild this last chapter. Although if someone broke into my house I think I'd be that angry as well, have to admit that. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 2 thumbs up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() . ?storyid23974 read my story pleasee |
![]() ![]() Dumb me, I meant what does Sara look like in the last review. I know her hair color now, but what about her eyes, or her figure, etc. And that goes for Ryan, too. Your story is very well written, it just needs more detail. The stalker is creepy. Continuing to read... |
![]() ![]() I just started reading this and I like it so far. Just one thing though is her brother's name Daniel or Shane or...? I was confused. Oh and what does Madison look like? I'm gonna continue reading now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah! Who is that guy? Can't you tell me! Please! LOL. I'm done now. Suspense utterly kills me. But this was on helluva chapter, that's for sure. How they didn't hear the dishes breaking, I don't know... Take care! |
![]() ![]() ![]() what is going on ? who is this person...hope u update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() 1. BY far a favourite story of mine its FNATSTIC! ahve you ever read the book BLUE SMOKE by Nora Roberts? This kinda reminds me of that a little |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey i love it i wish it was more detailed but it was good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool chapter! Love it! |
![]() ![]() great story hope u update soon |