This is great, kindly update, thanks!

Please updateeeee! Your writimg is so good, but why is the last updated date in 2006! I cant wait

Nooooooooooooo!

I am always sad to reach the end of the posted chapters of a truly excellent story. It pains me to look and see that the last update date was in 2006. As a failed author myself, I understand that it is very hard to regularly create content of this calibre.

I must say that you did a very good job. The writing is superb. The characters are excellent. I really love the concept in addition to the execution. I am especially fond of how you captured the essence of the characters so artfully.

My only critique is that you could elaborate on the sensation of the world falling out from under Emma's feet at the queen's relevation. You made a valid attempt, but it still did not feel as real as the rest of the story.

I found this story, after reading Forsaken Identity, on your author page. I liked this story better and would have loved to have seen it finished. However I fully appreciate the difficulty of writing on any sort of schedule. So no demands.

Best wishes in whatever you are onto now,
Simon

Will this ever be updated

... NO! NO! WHY!? WHY!? How dare you! DX How dare you leave the story at the biggest cliffhanger in the universe!? Come back PLEASE!

How am I supposed to die in peace now!? Huh? Please, I'm on my knees begging you. Update!

what time would you say this is set in?

I'm glad they will love her.

(screams and proceeds to beat you up)

How could you? IT WAS COMING ALONG SO NICELY AND YOU ABANDONED IT FOR SIX YEARS?

(shakes you)

C'mon, c'mon! I need to know what happens to Emma and John! I wanna read! This is one of the best medieval-themed stories I have ever read! You can't just stop here!

Hoping that you update soon,

Kusari-Gama

I understand that she is confused and angry at the moment, but I hope that she won't take it out on her parents. They are the innocent victims in this whole plot. They were given little or no choice.

Please update soon? I hope that you haven't abandoned the story altogether.

The irony of this situation (their first dance) is rich. The tragedy is that her parents might lose her just as they lost their son.

Were this real life, it was not uncommon for the family (the parents, at least) to suffer untimely deaths in order to preserve the secret forever.

One way to return Emma's birthright would be to have her marry John. I can't help but wonder if that was your intention. I look forward to reading more.

Aw man! This is where you left it? And haven't updated in almost five years? What the heck? Well, if you can let me know if you will continue with this story I'll know whether or not to add it to my alerts. I really want to know what happens.

I am wounded by the fact this story is incomplete.

Probably the best thing I have read on FictionPress.

AND, AT THIS PART!

I realize that the last time you updated was in 2006, but please, please, please, please update more for me? :)

Please you must continue! This is already a good premise and it must continue!

Is this story discontinued? I really love it. The plot is new and very refreshing. Is there really no hope for a continuation?