Reviews for The Lost Princess
Ggggirl chapter 13 . 10/19
Please updateeeee! Your writimg is so good, but why is the last updated date in 2006! I cant wait
Simon Illyan chapter 13 . 1/22
Nooooooooooooo!

I am always sad to reach the end of the posted chapters of a truly excellent story. It pains me to look and see that the last update date was in 2006. As a failed author myself, I understand that it is very hard to regularly create content of this calibre.

I must say that you did a very good job. The writing is superb. The characters are excellent. I really love the concept in addition to the execution. I am especially fond of how you captured the essence of the characters so artfully.

My only critique is that you could elaborate on the sensation of the world falling out from under Emma's feet at the queen's relevation. You made a valid attempt, but it still did not feel as real as the rest of the story.

I found this story, after reading Forsaken Identity, on your author page. I liked this story better and would have loved to have seen it finished. However I fully appreciate the difficulty of writing on any sort of schedule. So no demands.

Best wishes in whatever you are onto now,
Simon
Guest chapter 13 . 9/30/2015
Will this ever be updated
augmentedDREAMS chapter 13 . 1/8/2015
... NO! NO! WHY!? WHY!? How dare you! DX How dare you leave the story at the biggest cliffhanger in the universe!? Come back PLEASE!

How am I supposed to die in peace now!? Huh? Please, I'm on my knees begging you. Update!
Guest chapter 5 . 2/1/2013
what time would you say this is set in?
whatdotheydream chapter 3 . 12/18/2012
I'm glad they will love her.
Kusari-Gama chapter 13 . 4/24/2012
(screams and proceeds to beat you up)

How could you? IT WAS COMING ALONG SO NICELY AND YOU ABANDONED IT FOR SIX YEARS?

(shakes you)

C'mon, c'mon! I need to know what happens to Emma and John! I wanna read! This is one of the best medieval-themed stories I have ever read! You can't just stop here!

Hoping that you update soon,

Kusari-Gama
leavesfallingup chapter 13 . 11/19/2011
I understand that she is confused and angry at the moment, but I hope that she won't take it out on her parents. They are the innocent victims in this whole plot. They were given little or no choice.

Please update soon? I hope that you haven't abandoned the story altogether.
leavesfallingup chapter 8 . 11/19/2011
The irony of this situation (their first dance) is rich. The tragedy is that her parents might lose her just as they lost their son.

Were this real life, it was not uncommon for the family (the parents, at least) to suffer untimely deaths in order to preserve the secret forever.
leavesfallingup chapter 6 . 11/19/2011
One way to return Emma's birthright would be to have her marry John. I can't help but wonder if that was your intention. I look forward to reading more.
marzmez chapter 13 . 7/31/2011
Aw man! This is where you left it? And haven't updated in almost five years? What the heck? Well, if you can let me know if you will continue with this story I'll know whether or not to add it to my alerts. I really want to know what happens.
LivToWrite chapter 13 . 2/12/2011
I am wounded by the fact this story is incomplete.

Probably the best thing I have read on FictionPress.

AND, AT THIS PART!

I realize that the last time you updated was in 2006, but please, please, please, please update more for me? :)
The Low Brass Dude chapter 13 . 1/1/2011
Please you must continue! This is already a good premise and it must continue!
Erin DJ chapter 13 . 12/11/2010
Is this story discontinued? I really love it. The plot is new and very refreshing. Is there really no hope for a continuation?
starlight-angel88 chapter 13 . 4/14/2010
Amazing story! Please keep writing. You're fantastic!
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