Reviews for The Lost Princess |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this story's great so far! Update asap! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh u must update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice start! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Guh! It's like another addition to Phillipa Gregory's (or however you spell it) book collection! Wow, it just seems so like her books, but I hope it doesn't come with as much tragedy and horrificness? Sorry, lol, Gregory's books aren't necessarily my thing, but I like a sort of.. um, softness(?) about your style than in comparrisson to hers. AWESOME. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't even begin to tell you how good I find this story, but I do have one thing to say. You HAVE to update! Or I might die. ;) |
![]() ![]() Make the princess real. Make her manipulative, but make her great, in Elizabeth I style. By now any normal girl who just found out that kind of news would be scheming to marry the King, changeling or not, and make herself Queen of her rightful country, then control it. Just a suggestion, but it would be mega-cool if you did that because there aren't many characters like that. And it's stupid, because in reality, the characters that are most like that...win. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG you HAVE to update! This story is so well developed and written, and a real page turner! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the whole concept of this story; it is very interesting. However in my opinion i think there should be more character development. Im confused to whether Emma is suppose to seem nice because she sounds greedy in the recent parts. And John, is he suppose to be a "playboy"? But anyways, keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my! Please don't fixate on the "I should have been a princess" mindset! |
![]() ![]() Amazing story...it just gets better with every new chapter... pls try to update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story just gets better with every new sentence and chapter written. I hope that it will be soon that you update it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE UPDATE! I miss your story :-( |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a great story and I like it a lot. You're an awesome writer. Can't wait for the next installment! |
![]() ![]() I really like your story. However you could make it even better though and I'd just like to offer my opinion so don't take this badly at all. :] Pretty much, I'm a little confused. If the Queen is still alive why is her son King? Wouldn't he still be a Prince? And if you want to make him King because she wants to pass on the throne, then you need to call her the Queen Mother or something else (I'm not sure) because otherwise it's as if they are married which would be realy awkward. Anyway, great story, can't wait to read more! |