Reviews for New Girl
Guest chapter 49 . 7/31/2021
I know I'm years late, but I loved your story.
Carson chapter 49 . 4/14/2020
Idk if you still look at these but when I read books I can thing of an ending I would like so idk but I think you should maybe reread and finish it it would take one chapter maybe two to maybe a jump forward after the way the last chapter ended to like graduation and how lyndsey has actually started treating people with respect I hope you will think about it chapter 49 . 5/29/2017
Can't wait for chapter 50!
guest chapter 49 . 1/1/2017
thx for this amazing story eventhou unfinished.. u r very talented many twist..humor..interesting characters.. and ..always have unpredictable light angst..
i like original story better instead of fanfiction..
The Hidden Feeling chapter 49 . 8/5/2015
To be honest I think if you cleaned up the writing style a bit, possibly paced out the 'ending' in chapter 22 and put this through amazon self-publishing with a really good cover image, description and price, this could potentially sell really well.

If you completely 'remastered' it, this could even make some waves.
Insane or not, I think this is something people would love to read simply because it's such a refreshing concept. There are a few controversial themes in this, so there are multiple angles for people to find interest in this. The bully theme is something many people can relate to, more and more people find lesbian fiction cool, and the rape-consent debate is as old as humanity.

I'm not saying that there are no ways for this to totally flop, but then that's it; nobody would even know you failed, and if you manage to profile the themes the right way, without scaring people off, maybe make it a less rough around controversial parts (don't change anything though), and this could, and I'm stressing could here, become successful in a dirty pleasure kind of way, which would when you think about it really lead to some interesting debates.

'First 'Twenty Shades of Grey' and now 'New Girl'; when will this hellride to depravity end? More at 9pm'

I mean if Twenty Shades of Grey did it, why shouldn't this be possible for New Girl? Okay, TSOG is about as conservative as a 'controversial' book goes, but especially in the recent years people have become A LOT more accepting and many people yearn for hard topics. Especially on the internet, where they don't immediately come with stigma.

Worst case: you make a few dollars, and an experience with self-publishing. Also you can say that you faced your fears. ISN'T THAT SOMETHING?


plz give it a thought
you-dont-know-my-sstory chapter 1 . 11/9/2014
wow like, this is super hot, I'm trying to picture Lindsay and Jackie in my head, and like gaaaaaaah I love this
JJudkins chapter 7 . 10/16/2014
I had to stop here and let you know how much I'm liking your story so far.

'It's an inside joke.' Ha! Lindsey and Jackie are great together. It's been years since your last update so I guess you're done, but hopefully you've written other things.
Joni chapter 41 . 6/19/2014
"No, what's lame is Madison here, coming over to my house to give me an update about what I don't want to know!"
Best line ever
Truna chapter 26 . 5/23/2014
You pulled that off pretty darn solidly; Lindsey and Jackie are so realistic here. xD
Truna chapter 25 . 5/23/2014
This chapter was freaking amazing.

I can tell the next one will be a phenomenal feels trip.
Truna chapter 23 . 5/23/2014
omg my god no

Truna chapter 16 . 5/22/2014
xD Laughing my arse off.

Amazing chapter with a perfect mix of humor and seriousness.
Truna chapter 15 . 5/22/2014
Truna chapter 11 . 5/22/2014
Truna chapter 5 . 5/22/2014

Awesome character interactions.
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