Reviews for New Girl |
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![]() ![]() Good erotic stuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! Awesome porn (what! I say truth) story!XD It has a good plot with progress in main heroes characters. There were interesting thoughts. Though I think you're right saying that it better be finished when they say love you. After this there were strange things, that weren't too logical. Just thank you for good story! |
![]() ![]() truly amazing, and a nice twist ending even if yo wont ever complete it, you have a true gift for writing. quite thrilling for as long as it goes on, it is still to this day one of my favorite stories. i read from time to time. thank you for sharing it with the world. |
![]() ![]() Wow. I can't believe it. This is officially it. Thanks for the fun ride though. I enjoyed it a few years ago, but it really is unbelievable. Good luck with whatever you're doing now. Uni, probably. Happy Holidays. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait for the next update! |
![]() ![]() Lololololol. This sucks. You could have written an Epilogue where Jackie and Lindsey got their wedding and all that, featuring all the other people with Wit and Mandy together or something. Anyways, great read, thanks for the hard work. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() .. Oh wow.. Wit gave up that easily :p Well.. Why don't you just start a new story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it so far! |
![]() ![]() My mind, you killed it. I loved your story, but I understand you are extremely busy. Still, that doesn't stop me from being depressed that this story just... Ended all of a sudden. Amazing and sexy story you've written, where I enjoyed every bit of it. Kudos to you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO... T.T ah im upset it was such a good story as well... well unless somone on fictionpress asks if they can carry it on then i will just have to grin and bare it but i understand and im sure you r busy. i hope one day u will finish it or let another person finish it but untill then let me just say thanx 4 such a good story and good luck in all u do :D bibi |
![]() ![]() The irony.. of Chapter 48's title.. :L |
![]() ![]() ![]() dun dun dun..wit's going to chase mandy ? . |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked the fic, too bad she is interrupted. Anyway, congratulations on your history and if possible update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah!~ TT I hope you update soon~ I read this a few months ago~ think back in September or October?~ This story got me hooked on FxF more so than I was before reading it and have failed miserably in trying to find something that's similar. To the basher down below: . 90 percent of people who are raped DON'T talk about it. So it is realistic on Jackie's part. Plus, Lindsey's just really fricken dominant (and she changes later on o.o she becomes a little nicer towards Jackie. That coupled with the extremeness of Lindsey's dominance shows just how much she cares for Jackie). |
![]() ![]() oh whats going to happened next. more chapters. please, |