Reviews for New Girl
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Good erotic stuff.
GingerN chapter 48 . 6/26/2012
Hello!

Awesome porn (what! I say truth) story!XD

It has a good plot with progress in main heroes characters. There were interesting thoughts. Though I think you're right saying that it better be finished when they say love you. After this there were strange things, that weren't too logical.

Just thank you for good story!
des chapter 48 . 4/21/2012
truly amazing, and a nice twist ending even if yo wont ever complete it, you have a true gift for writing. quite thrilling for as long as it goes on, it is still to this day one of my favorite stories. i read from time to time. thank you for sharing it with the world.
Guest chapter 48 . 12/24/2011
Wow. I can't believe it. This is officially it.

Thanks for the fun ride though. I enjoyed it a few years ago, but it really is unbelievable. Good luck with whatever you're doing now. Uni, probably. Happy Holidays.
tacobby chapter 45 . 12/22/2011
I can't wait for the next update!
Ramp chapter 48 . 11/20/2011
Lololololol. This sucks. You could have written an Epilogue where Jackie and Lindsey got their wedding and all that, featuring all the other people with Wit and Mandy together or something.

Anyways, great read, thanks for the hard work. _
Affair chapter 47 . 9/17/2011
.. Oh wow.. Wit gave up that easily :p

Well.. Why don't you just start a new story?
sparkyzebo chapter 2 . 7/21/2011
I like it so far!
Yumeen chapter 48 . 4/29/2011
My mind, you killed it. I loved your story, but I understand you are extremely busy. Still, that doesn't stop me from being depressed that this story just... Ended all of a sudden. Amazing and sexy story you've written, where I enjoyed every bit of it. Kudos to you.
eyes101 chapter 48 . 4/7/2011
NO... T.T ah im upset it was such a good story as well... well unless somone on fictionpress asks if they can carry it on then i will just have to grin and bare it but i understand and im sure you r busy. i hope one day u will finish it or let another person finish it but untill then let me just say thanx 4 such a good story and good luck in all u do :D bibi
Hobo chapter 48 . 3/26/2011
The irony.. of Chapter 48's title..

:L
mia aurora chapter 47 . 3/15/2011
dun dun dun..wit's going to chase mandy ?

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nandinhama chapter 48 . 2/3/2011
I really liked the fic, too bad she is interrupted. Anyway, congratulations on your history and if possible update soon.
AuraDove chapter 48 . 1/26/2011
Gah!~ TT I hope you update soon~

I read this a few months ago~ think back in September or October?~

This story got me hooked on FxF more so than I was before reading

it and have failed miserably in trying to find something that's

similar.

To the basher down below: . 90 percent of people who are raped

DON'T talk about it. So it is realistic on Jackie's part. Plus,

Lindsey's just really fricken dominant (and she changes later

on o.o she becomes a little nicer towards Jackie. That coupled with the extremeness of Lindsey's dominance shows just how much

she cares for Jackie).
shhh chapter 48 . 1/19/2011
oh whats going to happened next. more chapters. please,
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