Hopefully you'll update. This story is interesting, especially with Jackie, Lindsey and Wit to spice it up; even the parents... -sighs- Well, it's probably the best femmeslash story so far. I better go, or my roomie would freak, she's PMSing and bitching at me.

Ja ne, Alexis.

hm well its almost 2011 hope u hav more time to update next year i love this story u hav a real talent dont abandon this

Um, I know you started writing this when you where 14, but this story is freakin' g*d awful -beyond immature, bordering on criminally stupid.

One of your main characters is a rapist who not only sexually, but physically assaults multiple characters without repercussions or conscience (You want to be a doctor? We call these people sociopaths, or psycopaths, depending on their chief complaint).

Your other lead's reactions are completely beyond belief, when any sane person would have had her arrested in the first chapters for physical and sexual assault (to say nothing of when she was rapped... only to keep her mouth shut because she didn't want people to know? Yeah, BS.). And speaking of insane, all the characters in your story are too freakin' stupid or oblivious not to notice what's going on, or that they mistake rape and torture for love.

I really hope this is a farce, and that your writing this to take a piss. If this is really what you think love is, get help.

AS crazy as i am, i love you story! im thinking bout rereading it until you update since you're taking forever to do so. but hey, i cant do nada bout it so plz update. summer is almost ovr and i wanna know what happens nxt. satisfy your readers/ fans ASAP.

-DarkShadow

i'm really in love with your story

god lindsey and jacky,awh they are soo cute together *-*

the only thing that i don't like is: i'm austrian...and yeah my english isn't so good, so i don't understand all what you are writting

pls update soon (:

and sorry for my bad english xD

sexy. slightly frustrating. lindsey is hot, but why is she so crazy?

whoa... good details, the little things you mention are nice, like Lindsey loving cheese and Jackie prefering things that are blue. Well, i, uh, LOVE the sex, yeah... The problems that pop up in the story actually are of interest, not stupid or awfully generic. You've got talent. Really love the story so far and can't wait 'till you publish it. I'm real happy things are going well for you too, you deserve it. I know everyone asks but... when you have time... no pressure...update...plz.

thnx. hope awesomness comes your way.

such a good story and it seems like u just leaving it there to rot. its been at least 4 months. plz update soon!

Please update soon! I love ur story and i just gotta know what happends next! :)

it's the end of may. get your ass back

to updating. honestly, i will find you

and then slap you if don't. you seriously

have to update. really, really soon. like,

now. yeah. now would be a great time.

have a nice day.

it's great to heard from you. I seriously thought you would dead from the site. D: and you updated on my birthday hahah. well hope everything goes well until the summer i can't wait to read more of this. :) Thanks for the notice!

-Yours. M.

"What the hell did I tell you about those," Lindsey ridiculed. "They go straight to your ass.

xD lol thats awesome. Isnt that what the girl said on the movie Hot Chicks?yeah i think it is,i dont kno.

Whoa, didnt see that coming. :o

woops soz Kirstie* xD

love you kirsty (: