|Reviews for Season|
| classic violet chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
nights first hurricane'
I love that line the most.
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
and subtley calm
| Chaos Apple chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
I like the way you blended it all together. I dislike it when people use one idea per line; you tell the story behind it ("it" being the haiku) better. I like most of your work, and how you're not afraid to experiment with your style. I stick to what I know; I'm one-dimensional like that. Also, I don't know how to use semi-colons. Lmao.
Loves, Lie to Me/I-love-you-for-it
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
m reminds me of katrina for some odd reason b/c it was so horrific. nice work and keep on going!
| Plastic Roses Never Die chapter 1 . 6/15/2006
this is a very sweet little poem. I don't think i like the form very much. Don't get me wrong, i love haikus, but i think each line should be it's own idea, not the whole thing being one sentance blended together. This is just my opinion
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 6/15/2006
The imagery of the simplicity of the frog is very striking when in comparison to the hurricane. Well done.
| VanG Ziggy ZA chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
This was pretty good, I love haikus!
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
I'm a sucker for the concise :) Do you mean nights to be plural or possessive? The first line makes this poem very intimate and the whole thing has a cozy, gentle feel to it. Excellent!