Reviews for All in your Head
Nemonus chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
I quite enjoy the lines "You saved a damsel in distress?/It better not have been me…". "A living drama,/A living lie." is a bit clumsy with rhythm. Interesting thoughts...also good enough words. I like also "I’m sorry you actually believed anyone believed you.", though it sounds very good-pop-song-y.
godsandstars chapter 1 . 6/20/2006
i like it. dark. good job
Marionette Dancer chapter 1 . 6/19/2006
amazing! this is the kind of work i look for when i look for the good stuff! that sounded cheezy, but so are most of the true things in life, eh?
Xerophyte chapter 1 . 6/19/2006
I like this...I wonder what inspired you to write this. I also like how you capitalized the word 'lie'. It was subtle, but it made the word important.-The former Andi Carmichael
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
Great job! *applaudes*, write on!

Aluminum Tinkerbell chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
Very nice! I love your mastary of words.