Reviews for Temporary
Counter Spiral chapter 1 . 9/3/2006
I really liked this piece, partly because of the rhythms and repetition of everyday events, and also because it is apparent how much effort you put in. The concept is original, and there is a part of the verse to appeal to every reader. The double meaning of the end adds interest. I especially appreciated the way your character reacts to all of the events with different revelations and memories. Great job.
hear me smile chapter 1 . 6/15/2006
Uncomfortable, frustrating, angsty; you've captured it perfectly.

I hope you do find a way to fix things. Not just temporarily.
burning in effigy chapter 1 . 6/15/2006
Strange, but I like it... quite different but kind of like talking what you did one day. Or... that's how I interpret it.

Great job!