Reviews for Painted
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
I like the general idea, but I'm still a little confused on what you're trying to tell the reader.I'm sorry I scare you sometimes...Thanks for reviewing all my stuff. It means so
Freed by Mercy chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
I like this. You're writing is general is you ever go back to peices and rework them to make them sparkle a bit more, or to clarify your point of view?

My favorite lines here ar just 2 words, the first word always last stanza, why don't you say "Painted white" instead of "Painted in white' for example?
Just-try'en-to-speak chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
i'm a bit confused about what this is about
CocoAH chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
oh I really like this. great job