|Reviews for Shotglass Eyes|
| the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
These things are the things,
the rings, the black slings
of the puffpaint kings;
slicked thickly on beneath the. . .
that bit : that... that is gorgeous.
such rhythm in this. tonguetwister shotgun imagery
| E.L.Fairy chapter 1 . 6/17/2006