WOW THAT WAS SO SWEET THAT WAS SO CUTE

OMG! Please make a sequel PLEASE!..*cries*

YESS! Excellent chapter! I hope Jack isn't just part of her imagination..that would be terrible! :( Update soon! I need to know what happens next!

OMG! OH please update, AMAZING!

hey! once again a brilliant chapter. aw i think he loves her- i would too if she made my heart beat after years of being frozen...and if i was a guy lol P

this is pretty interesting

wow, this is amazing. great work, sorry i missed the last chapter but I only just remembered the post it note with ur story on it that i was meant to search for, lol D

the dragons sound excellent, i can't wait to see what happens with the fire and what happens between jenna and jack. are they soulmates, or something?

My question exactly... just who is this guy?

Very interesting story! :o) I really like it so far and your description is right on point. I wish I could be as descriptive. The principal...he seems cool :o) Mysterious also. Good job on the first chapter. Keep up the good work.

CK

hey! damn this is gd! i saw the word dragon in the summary and since i like things like tht i thought i'd give it a try. i think i liked the last chapter the best. wat is he? a vampire? and jenna, it said she wasn't from this world. wat, is she on a quest or something?

neways, great story! hope to be reading more soon!

Enticing. Hehe funny word. I'd say it was descriptive and mysteriously good. I liked it. Update!

Interesting start - you start off with lots of loose ends that makes the reader keep reading rather than just stopping after the first line or two...