Reviews for an open mind
TheLiving Dead123 chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
Probably my favorite piece from you. The rhythm is great. The concept is very good, with unusual vagueness yet supplied with intricate details. A dream, yes. Great. Title is good too!
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
This is beautiful and excellently written. I love the rhythem to it, you have an interesting style. I added this to my favorite stories list and you to my favorite authors.
simply meg chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
I like this really much... it just, fits. Nice work! Write On!
burning in effigy chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
"power’s just a fantasy/myths are often true/reality’s a shallow ditch" love that. actually, really like the entire poem, and how it can paint a picture in your head; peaceful and dreamy :)