Reviews for Thirteenth Floor Guys |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I doubt this was the ending you had planned but as the only one us readers have it is more than enough. Thanks for writing such a lovely story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really adorable! The characters were great - FP is severely lacking in likeable, non-bitchy female main characters, but Thea's making up for that. Fallon's great. I also like how you wrote the sex scene - oftentimes, authors make it too graphic and long, but you got the point across without overdoing it. It was sweet. Now off to check your profile for any other stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story why did you stop updating, please get back to the this story its great, i want to know wat happens when the family finds out and when there friends find out, please get back to this story its awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMFG Awsome Story! I love it please update son! |
![]() ![]() ![]() way awesome. I love it. I love all your characters and the dynamics in the interaction is amazing. Your writing style is great and even though I usually don't like alternating points of view, you've definitely done a good job with it. Kudos D Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like this story, i cant wait to see what is going to happen next. please update soon! great job! Michelle |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! Fallon and Thea are so cute together! But not to a sickening degree which is good.. Can't wait to read more..I wan tot see who's going to win the bet and the three grand ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW how finally got together. Took them long enough. Anyways im really liking this story. so PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! |
![]() ![]() ![]() it was awsome! is this the end of the story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() AHSH! when she told him that she loved him it was so ironic because she sorta does and it was so relate-able since i had those sorta ironic moments. anywhos, i'm going to read more now. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally, the two of them are together. I like they way this story is playing out, it's well written two. please update! |
![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS STORY. :] keep updating please. i kept getting the chills when i read it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! Nice last two chapters! I'm definitely sticking to your story. Can't wait what happens. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, and update! *does a victory dance* ;p |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fine Then. Leave us poor readers dangling by a very thin, streched out cord, about to fall to our deaths until you update. Just kidding. I love Thea and Fallon! And what a Christmas present for the family... |