|Reviews for One Night|
| herondalechick123 chapter 1 . 4/16
Amazing story! It was short and sweet but I kind of wished it was longer though. Can't wait to read more of your stories :)
| Guest chapter 15 . 4/12
The story is sweet and short.A great story,well too cliché it is just right .
| crazy lion chapter 1 . 2/27
Hi Lauren! I've just found your story. It took my attention since I read the plot. The first chapter is a presentation of James and I have to admit that, in a certain way, I'm like him. Many times I prefer to be alone. I have some friends, but many times loneliness is my friend. This seems like sad, but although once it was so, for me, now I have larnt that being lonely helps me doing things I didn't do before, like writing for example. I say this because i think that James, too, loves to be alone. He is accostumed to it. He isn't sad when he is alone, no, he is happy! I love reading stories when a character likes writing, because I feel like him in this sense, too.
Talking about te fact that James didn't want do be helped by his friend when his mother died... well, I know by my experience that there are some people (like me for example) who have to be alone when a person dies, who pretend to be so, because they don't want to share their pain with others. But I think James went wrong, because he didn't talk to her friend about his grief, even when some time had passed from his mother's death. Well, in my opinion, this is not a so good behavior. it hurts James not to talk about his grief, surely.
Great story so far.
crazy lion (my real name is Giulia)
| Chimel321 chapter 15 . 7/30/2016
Dear Lauren, I have read all of your stories now and they are really reeeeaaallly good.I hope you haven't stopped writing on fiction press as it has been a long time since you updated more stories. I love your work and I hope you continue to post more stories. Ps- your stories were one of the very first ones I read in fiction press and they are still by far my favourite. PLEASE UPDATE SOON
| Guest chapter 15 . 6/1/2016
That was a sweet story... Really loved it
| mgaa chapter 10 . 5/6/2016
ooh she's just adorable...and there's a five year gap...wow okay she managed to keep it from him that long
| mgaa chapter 6 . 5/6/2016
omg,,,I stopped breathing..i just read through the rest after the clinic...I even dropped my chopsticks in my chips...I really thought she went through with it...gaaawd..just soo glad she didn't...I know it's very difficult for them but I'm still glad
| auroraglider chapter 3 . 11/4/2015
You didn't waste any time. That was hot, hot, hot! I had to stop and catch my own breath. Lol. You dd an excellent job writing that intimate scene. Great chapter
| auroraglider chapter 2 . 11/4/2015
I like your chapters so far. It seems like an interesting storyline. On to the next chapter.
| auroraglider chapter 1 . 11/4/2015
You definitely have my interest piqued. I am anxious to read more.
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/28/2015
Thank you so much for not going with the abortion thing. I am very Pro-Life and I wouldve been heartbroken if she had gotten an abortion.
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/9/2014
THIS WAS THE MOST ... AMAZING HEARTWARMING TEAR JERKING BEAUTIFUL STORY I'VE EVER EVER EVER! READ THERE SHOULD BE A SEQUEL
| BlackHare9 chapter 15 . 9/7/2014
This was one of the few stories about teenage pregnancy that I really liked. It was so sweet.
| Carpe Nixta chapter 15 . 6/8/2014
Totally heart warming
| Carpe Nixta chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
Lovely, thanks for writing this.