Reviews for One Night
X All of the Above X chapter 15 . 3/22/2008
Aww that was such a cute story! I woulda cried if they hadn't got together!
Vicci chapter 15 . 3/18/2008
Aww, this was a nice story. It had a good idea with not telling James. Must be a struggle if that really happened.. can't image what it'd be like really.

But yeah, nice story! :)
bubbles chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
this first chapter makes James look and sound like the stereotypical misunderstood guy. he seems like more of a stereotypical concept than an actual real person because he is just a little too "perfect".
randoms chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
i absolutely loved it (:
dOrKy-GuRl03 chapter 15 . 2/17/2008
that is a good very story..i like it..can't believe that its over already..bye..bye...
LoneRanger chapter 15 . 1/30/2008
Great story! I really liked it, especially that it was short but at the same time full of action.
Sedated Delinquent chapter 15 . 1/26/2008
This simply took my breath away.
Kasey chapter 9 . 1/23/2008
I've been reading this story miost of the day. You know, your a really good writer! When the caracters feel somthing, (Sarrow, happiness, pain, ect) The reader can feel it to. THATS TALENT!

Cant wait to read the rest!
tanya2byour21 chapter 15 . 1/16/2008
This was a great story and I loved it.

Tanya
thisorthat chapter 15 . 1/2/2008
yay! i finally read it! *does happy dance*

it sounded like sweet from the summary so i wanted to read it but stupid fp was going through problems for the past few days. It's a cookie cutter idea but I think your spin on it makes the story unique. it's full of fluffy goodness _~
sunsetLover chapter 15 . 12/19/2007
oh my gosh...lady, you've made me cry twice tonight...better get a publisher...lol...shoots, my cousin will be home soon and my cousin would wonder why my nose is red and my eyes puff...

please, please, please write more...where are you exactly in Cali?...i'm from Cali to...lol...

oh yes, and i so love GREN to...we pretty have much a lot in common...and reading BOOKS comes first in my list of interest to..lol

goodluck and bless you!...looking forward to more of your stories...
Lochi chapter 15 . 12/14/2007
wow I cried kinda a lot reading this story. it was emotive and it was very well written. even if it was short, it was beautiful. i liked the last chapters the most, where he found out about Anna and then the chapter when they forgot a condom again lol it was a touching story )
cherrygurl1225 chapter 15 . 12/8/2007
Your story is incredible. Everything from beginning to end flows flawlessly well. Even though you've ended it, I think it definitely could be sequel worthy. Very well-developed plot, believable characters and dialogue, which all ends up coming to a close with a happy ending. I LOVED it! So glad she didn't have an abortion! Then you wouldn't have been able to create the magic that you created with this story. Keep on writing! ;)
Aynn chapter 11 . 12/5/2007
Oh my! It's been a while since I've been so engrossed in a story that wasn't a mystery. I absolutely love your story! ...Which explains why I've been neglecting an essay which needs to be completed tonight just to read it. Love it, love it, love it! Every once in a while there's a typo or a slip in tensing, but not enough to mar the story. Did I mention that I love your story? I look forward to reading more of it and others from you. Thanks for writing!
Lilly S. Robert chapter 15 . 12/4/2007
I read tons and tons of the stories on this site most of them are very lacking but i can honestly say that i enjoyed your story very much. I really don't mind it was i short story at all, your a very good author and i really like how you write. Hope to read more of your writings and i really did enjoy read this story.
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