Reviews for One Night
Moonxpi chapter 15 . 2/4/2007
~sighs dreamily~ Aw. That was so cute. I had to keep running back and forth from the Superbowl to here cause I wanted to read it so badly. I'm not much for football but I have money on this game. I just won 25 bucks. Ha! Your story must be good luck. Thanks for writing it. I really enjoyed it.
kazahana chapter 15 . 2/4/2007
Wow, it's done! It was short and sweet, I'm sort of glad it wasn't dragged on forever like some other stories on FP. This is definitely on my favourites list, I'll re-read it in the future from times to time.
AikenisFein chapter 14 . 2/4/2007
lovely update!
Iamthebomb chapter 15 . 2/4/2007
wen this story finished i started singing one night only by beyonce have u herd it?
Sara chapter 15 . 2/4/2007
Great read!

I've been committed to reading your story since it has started, and it definitely didn't disappoint! You wrote your epilogue so quickly after you posted the last chapter! Thanks for writing!
akaCHEEKS chapter 15 . 2/3/2007
aaww. it's done? it was originally supposed to be a short story too? aaww. i missed that one. i thought it was going to be long. that sucks. it was a really great story. well if you ever change your mind. i'll keep looking up at this story to see if you made it longer. there needs to be more drama for this one. i mean. gosh. they have sex at a high school party. she gets pregnant. hides it from him. 5 years later, BAM! then they're together again. gosh.
OoohLookACat chapter 15 . 2/3/2007
it doesn't matter how rushed it was!

it was still good after all!

lol, i loved it - very cute ending.

who-im-bleeding-for chapter 15 . 2/3/2007
amazing. simply, amazing. i seriously cannot describe how much I love this. If it became a movie, I would most definitely watch it.
Sam chapter 15 . 2/3/2007
Yay, for happy endings. The epilogue was very sweet and I have enjoy reading it from beginning to end. Thank you for actually finishing this lovely story.
Frederick chapter 15 . 2/3/2007

I'm sad it's over
Sam chapter 14 . 2/3/2007
Thanks for the summary. Aww, they're still in love. Hahaha, all that pent up sexual need hit the roof, haha. I found the chapter sweet and funny. Thanks for updating.
hellokittygirl chapter 15 . 2/3/2007
Ok. Now I think it's my time to squeal like a annoyingly disgusting chav.

OHMYGOSH! YOUR STORY WAS AMAZING AND I'M ECSTATICALLY HAPPY IT'S FINISHED! D hehe. Truly, it was wonderful. Granted, it was a bit short, like you said, but I loved it. The plot was fairly original.

Great, great job.

& Congrats as well. )

sleepiedreamer chapter 15 . 2/3/2007
aws its over...i cant believe it is over already it was such a good story! great job i loved it!
Mochamint19 chapter 15 . 2/3/2007
Wow, I have been following this story for awhile and this was amazing. It is so bittersweet that it is over. I enjoyed it so much. You have so much talent and I enjoyed reading each chapter. I liked the plot, it was your simple,fun, boy next door love story. I loved it and how you made it your own. Out of all the books and short stories I have read. Even by established writers, this one will be on my favorites list. I loved it thank you!
Lyrical.Love chapter 15 . 2/3/2007
Aw that was so incredibly sweet.

I absolutely adore this story.

Thanks for writing it!
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