Reviews for White Hot Heat
ash the arsnist chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
amazing diction... the last few lines were absolutely incredible
Leaving Here chapter 1 . 8/3/2006
i like how you write. its very cool!Liz
The Melancholy Cocoa Bean chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
wow this is really amazing, the words seem to stab you like arrows and knives, like it says at the begininng.

keep it up!
a lonely september chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
this was really hot. it's so well written and sweet and... just really good. : )
Flies chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
This sent chills down my spine, it's beautifully written! I think the first two lines "shoot me with arrows (stop throwing knives)" really hit the reader (at least me) and makes you just keep reading. I like the happy metaphoric clich├ęs and then the "white. hot. heat", it's really well done, this poem, is just, marvelous.