Nice, I like all the humor, and it's a nice introduction to the story. You spell practicing with an "S".

Ah. Lovely end to a fantastic story. I love your writing. :)

best story ever! I absolutely LOVE this! you are a great author ]

I love this story through and through, and I just thought I'd drop by and add that one more time with an extra review :) Callum & Marla are just the best together. I actually made a pact not to read anymore stories until winter break but the desire to reread this one was just overwhelming, so I caved in Day 2 and read... hahahah :)

Love this! I'm still waiting for some more of Xnay of Angerday :)

- Alyssa

EPILOGUE! loved it.

I think I like this story better then The V word, just because she's more like me. I still think that Jess and Cal need to get to get. Hehe i don't want his soul to be endangered any more. This story made me Laugh so many times. Hech, i read the V word so long ago, and then I came back to find you had another story. And the P.M. is immeadatly what set it into my mind that i needed to share it with my best friend. So we read it all pretty much in a contests to who could finish fastests... she won b/c she didn't have to work the next day. But her and I really love the details you put into it.. So we spent the whole night messageing each other back and forth with random words from the plot "Shotgun NOT!","mystical baby preventive tattoo!","horizontial mambo!", "greenhouse on crack!","callum the puppy boiler!","Tall, blond, utterly gorgeous man missing? Last seen naked in the vicinity of the park?".. That is just part of the converstation we've had.. and disscions. I think you've created monsters to say the least. oh and for the record i think your take on soul mates and joining and vampire, whiches and werewolfs is very refreshing.

.. I'm offically HOOKED. I've read all three... and I'm ... so... god.. no..

words

can...

gah.

*loves*

*complete with hearts in eyes*

I can't wait for the next story or updates of any story... *in awe*

*is now speechless and bows to you, a master*

bahahaa.

alright i have to say, that i am exactly like marla in the sense that i am a jealous person.

so when she said..."In my bed was left unsaid, but I knew she was thinking it. Slut."

AHAHAHHA omg. i cracked up.

your so funny. :)

This is a really good story. I enjoyed it a lot.

I just read this story and I really enjoyed it. The chemistry between Marla and Callum is great - really cute story.

ok i love both of your stroies ive read so far! totally creative! and i love how some of the vamps are famous ppl from histroy! so cool! but i really think you should do a story about calc and jessica . . .well im off to read the third story!

You let me violate you

You let me desecrate you

You let me penetrate you

You let me complicate you

Help me

I broke apart my insides

Help me I've got no

Soul to tell

Help me

The only thing that works for me

Help me get away from myself

I want to fuck you like an animal

I want to feel you from the inside

I want to fuck you like an animal

My whole existence is flawed

You get me closer to God

Best. Song. Ever.

WO! She's four eleven! Just like me! *pumps fists proudly into air*

what were the two books you were talking about in chapter 2?

Nicely done. :)

-Katherine