|Reviews for W is for WHAT?|
| MizSphinx chapter 20 . 9/20/2007
Exceptional read this one was. Took me two days, amidst the obstructions of you know that 'thing' (Life) lol. I liked h ow you kept the characters in tune with themselves, that they weren't awry at certain points. The plot was really good too, quite unique in my opinion. I don't want to sound all gushy over it but kinda hard not to seeing how I positively enjoyed this. Had me up 12 in d morning reading it...pausing then getting back to it the following day! lol so yeah, Callum was very delicious and unlike Marla, I liked the long hair (or my imagination did). Again, exceptional read :).
Anyway, adding this to my favs and heading over to your other fic :) Keep up the good work!
| Dragon of luck chapter 20 . 9/17/2007
| akaCHEEKS chapter 20 . 8/22/2007
cute as hell! who's next? haha i love your stories dude!
| AJS chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
Oh okay. 2 more things before I go and leave you alone :) One is, if Marla was a virgin, why didn't it hurt when they first had sex? And the other is just a comment about how I like it how Marla started out completely unexperienced and virginal because it really added an extra charm to this story. Even in chapter 20 in the shower, it somehow seemed to maintain a slight air of innocence in the way she acted and everything :) I think that also has a lot to do with the reason why this story is so cute as opposed to freaking hot. Marla's still a teenager and growing and you don't ever seem to forget that, which is good, and I liked it a lot.
Also just one more thing. The first time after Marla & Callum had fooled around, I got hella confused because I thought that just Callum pleasured her but then in the next chapter she said something about sex so I was just like huh? T_T But yeah, that was the only real moment of confusion that I had that wasn't really cleared up.
Anyways, amazing job, as I told you before :) I'm completely enamored with your fics, your world that you've created, and your characters, of course. Someone said this before but just to reiterate, your character development is amazing. I hope to read more soon!
| AJS chapter 20 . 8/17/2007
While The V Word is an amazingly hot story, and while there still are amazingly hot scenes in THIS story too, I think W is for WHAT? is more cute. Callum & Marla are so freaking adorable together, even when they are having amazingly hot sex. Hah. I swear, you really really do have an amazing talent for writing hot sex/make out scenes and you really know how to build up the tension, intensity, and the climax. I'm not sure how you do it but I can never seem to get enough :)
Callum & Marla are always arguing, probably moreso because of Marla's personality, which I love, btw. She's so freaking hilarious and although sometimes I have to agree with Callum, she is a little over the top and unappreciative, I envy her a lot :) I'm trying real hard right now to imagine her new green lines all over her body but every time I try to I cringe because I think if that was me, I would burst into a fit and cry for that stuff to get off of me T_T Just her arms were cute but I guess now I'm imagining her as some... marimo (all-green Japanese cartoon) alien or something of the sort T_T
Argh the bitch's name is always Alyssa, isn't it? Why must that be my name too? Actually it didn't really matter much to me, but it was just weird when I was c&ping a quote that was dissing Alyssa and I thought to myself that it might not be so wise but whatever, haha :) I like how even despite her terrible personality though, she wasn't made out to be the ultimate bad one.
Reading this story makes me want to go back and reread The V Word, which I've been meaning to reread for so damn long simply because it's so freaking hot. I totally didn't expect Callum to be a vampire! Although now that I think about it, I'm not sure why I didn't, lol. I guess I couldn't share some of the confusion that Marla had because I already knew things about your vampires from the other one. Did I ever mention to you how ridiculously obsessed I've become with vampires ever since reading your The V Word? You have me hooked!
So pretty much, this story is amazing. I might even like it better than The V Word. Actually, I'll have to ponder that. But Callum is just so damn... yum. Argh. He's so hot where's my Callum? You're an amazing writer. I am so freaking envious of you it should be illegal. Please please PLEASE keep on writing because I'm already craving to read more :D Keep up the good work!
(yikes. Should I be signing with that name after this story...?)
| mia5081 chapter 20 . 8/6/2007
Ah, I loved it! I love the whole family, and I was wondering what Heidi was talking about earlier in the story Marla not having to worry about not being with Justin for the rest of her life. I like how the story turned out, and you have some major talent. Great job!
| sweetone0018 chapter 20 . 8/3/2007
Amazing. absolutely amazing. I loved this story as much as the V word.
O love all you characters. them make me giggle.
| Emma Lee chapter 20 . 7/24/2007
omg I LOVED THIS STORY, IT TOATALLY ROCKED! THE ENDING WAS AWESOME TOO, FANTASTIC JOB, VERY WELL WRITTEN, CONGRATS ON AN AMAZING STORY!
| awaiting.rain chapter 20 . 7/20/2007
for the past few weeks i've been skirting around this story..you know, like when youre at a party and staring at that delicous looking piece of chocolate cake but youre plate is already full, and even while your stuffing yourself you cant help but keep sneaking peeks at the piece of cake just sitting there? well i'm glad i decided to eat the cake.
| awaiting.rain chapter 16 . 7/20/2007
argh. marlas attitude problem is starting to bug me. i hate how shes being mean to kate...
| awaiting.rain chapter 11 . 7/20/2007
her brother and mother are uhh witches or something too?
would they be witches since theyre like family?
| wolf parade chapter 20 . 7/16/2007
I couldn't read your story and not review at some point. Mainly because vampires are so sexy, the idea of someone drinking my blood and said person being indescribably cardinally sinful is, well, hot -for lack of a better word.
I knew I shouldn't have made this a signed review...
Anyway, I'm moving on to read 'The V Word' which I'm guessing is about Kate/Damien though I think I'm reading them in the wrong order. The thing I'd be most interested in is Callum/Marla after 'W is for What?'; they have an eternity together and when you left off, nothing to do, you're a great writer and if you go slightly more in-depth you could have some truly great, publishable stories, seriously and as fun as a happy ending is and however sexy you partner may be. I think I'd end up killing them if I were to be stuck with them for an eternity.
Anyway, they're great stories, like it or not, expect more reviews from me in the future.
| Erisah Mae chapter 20 . 7/10/2007
Any attempt for a detailed review would just end in repetition-
this story is FUCKING AWESOME!
| Kat chapter 5 . 7/7/2007
Have you ever read Dark Desire by Christin Feehan. It's a good book. I love your story or at least the first four chapters that I have read. I am looking forward to continuing reading your work.
| heytheredelilah chapter 20 . 7/6/2007