Conversely to what other reviewers have said, I think Marla is probably my favourite heroine out of your three stories in this series. She makes me laugh :)

I also really love Callum (but who wouldn't?)

you deserve a review do here goes

wow

the end but seriously epic! your so talented well done on a great job

I spoke too soon:) I'm glad Marla got her awakening in form of her mom! I kinda think her slightly ornery side plus her enlightened self makes a much more mature and appealing character! Congrats! The character growth spurt and proof of her original self was a great way to end the story!

Oh goodness. I never thought i'd say this for any of your stories but, Marla is a brat! Omg. I can't believe she'd mentally insult Kate over her perkiness or 'told' her to drop dead AND demand that Kate promised to take care of her family. All the trouble she and Callum are in is really because of her over inflated ego and pride and pure bitchiness. I'm really really sorry! I love ALL your other stories to death and adore every character, but Marla seriously tests my patience and I honestly wanna tell her to shut the toot up and take the stick out of her hoohoo. Being independent is one thing, but obnoxious and rude to people who want to help is just unsavory. :(

Okay. So. You like constructive criticism, right? So, I'm not sure how this rates as constructive criticism, but I have to get this off my chest.

D: I can't stand Marla. She's so.. Bitchy. She's actually very unlikable, because she fights fom the get-go. I know thisstems from being an outcast, but she snarls at anyone who so much as says, 'hello'. Your writing is entertaining enough to where I want to finish this and move on the Xnay story. But Marla really needs to grow up, ditch all that Teen angst, and understand when she's wrong. And Callum needs to put her i'n her place, not kiss her forehead and chuckle it off. That being said- he's got te patience of a saint. And he looks of a god. Props on creating him! Callum makes this story so enjoyable.

sexy and interesting. i have nothing to complain about. you are an amazing writer.

Great story!

hahahahha like that

I think what I love the most about you and your stories is that you get the perfect balance between adventure, reality and romance. Not many authors can boast that! Congratulations on finishing a wonderful piece. I love you did stories for all of the girls- and now that I'm done with them, I can go back to the real world, because I was soo distracted with whats going to happen next.

This is the longest review I have ever written and it was well-justified. Amazing story and characters.

Kudos to you!

Hi ! First chapter, and this already caught my attention :D I really like the way Marla doesn't let people walk all over her and stands up for herself, exactly what I need in a good heroine. I mean, those girls who depend on people, be it family/boyfriend/friends to defend themselves get on my nerves very very fast. Already, Marla's "originality" is showing, and that's really good, it's not a slow start, like you see on some stories, even if it might work for them. Judging by the last sentence, there's gonna be some major things next chappie maybe, I guess we'll have to see. I'm already dying to know the rest :D You've done a really good job of starting the story, and keeping me (and probably the other readers) interested. One thing I'm a bit confused about though is her brother. When you say he's a great musician, you write he has a perfect pitch. But wouldn't that be for singing ? Eh. Maybe I'm wrong, I don't know. Keep up the good writing !

See ya next time,

- Eva.

I friggen love all your stories!

man! I wish you'd publish them! I'd buy everything that had your friggen name on it! Your ideas about all the vamp stuff is unbelievable! You really need to get a copyright on it before someone steals it. If there is someone stealing other's works, then yours will be one of the first! It's just too good! (hehe... it think that was a weird complement... but your good enough to be one of those writers that end up in barnes and noble!)

AW! Such an adorable ending! I loved this story, it was just as good as The V Word. My eyes were glued to the screen. Fantastic!

Aw. This was a cute chapter, you know, at the end. Alyssa needs to back off. She is getting on my last good nerve. And MArla shold really stop fighting so friggin' hard. I love it, and you're a great writer. No complaints.

This one is also amazing so far. I can't wait to find out what appened to Callum.

ANOHTER AWESOME ONE! I had something to tell you though. I found a problem in here that contradicts what is said in The V Word but I forgot. Just to let you know that something's in there.

But it's probably nothing. I tend to over-react to slight flaws. I once bitched someone out for writing that the fact that the main character had a twin and the main character's father had a twin it wasn't hereditary though him.

ANYWAYS I really liked that idea about Calc and Jessica so yeah. I'm all for it! This was really amazing. I like how you don't just write one basic character even when the people are raised in completely different conditions. Most people /cough/ stephenie meyer /cough/ can only write one basic main character.

AND like I mentioned before you've kept me up all night reading.

g'night,

~BB