You're brilliant and I love you! lol. Your stories are always great and I cant wait for the next chapter

Wow. That's one way to ruin a moment; but funny as crap. So, Callum's need to protect Marla is officially cute as hell. If only other guys were as sweet as he. Update soon, please!

Hey! Wow thats chapter was awesome! They were so close to "that" wow please update again soon lol, i check for your updates everyday now! :D

this was a really great chapter! marla is softening to callum, hooray

aw soo close

the counter scene at the end was masterfully done. haha. I started laughing too. I have no critique. Lovely.

Wow what a great chapter! Please write more SOON!

i really enjoyed this chapter. but what a mean place to end it! lol. maybe i missed it but what was the secret marla was keeping? the person who almost died trying to protect her because i got the idea that was Callum and obviously that wasn't a secret.

i hope you feel better what being in the hospital and all, can continue with this story sooner rather than later. ~nicole

Sorry to hear you were sick, hope you are feeling much better! I think FP was on the fritz for the whole month of December...

AnyWay, good chapter, I have misse reading your stuf so please dont make us wait too long for the next one!

*hehe* poorly timed head-smacking. That was cute.

I don't think your lack of review notifications had anything to do with alterations you may have made. I've noticed that the FP alerts have been acting up a great deal lately... not working at all for long periods of time and then "dumping" assloads of notifications all at once. Not sure what's up with that.

Love how their relationship is developing so gradually and naturally into something more serious, and am certainly curious to discover more about Marla's history that was hinted at here.

Keep writing! *insert lots of author-love here*

)O( Rhi.

Cute chapter

Great chapter! I especially liked the part where Marla was trying to escape and he caught her, coincidentially I was listening to MI:3 Soundtrack, and it played along wonderfully, it was hilarious!

Update soon!

Until the next review!

Wow. That is pretty much the most hilarious ending to a chapter I've seen.

_ That's all.

that was so cute. the soundproofed walls thing was pretty amusing too.. umm what else. oh yeah. the contrast between marla's grumpiness in the morning and kate's is very amusing. haha i am EXACTLY like a marla, and my cousin is like a kate. who the heck wakes up at seven on weekends? sheesh. its like she really actually does have an internal alarm clock. ookay thats it! updates?

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so close that time :P

lmfao. marla can be such a. ditz sometimes.

bumping her head into the counter.

i was wondering when she was gunna realize that callum being a vampire really really good hearing.

'“Marla,” he said in that low controlled voice, although this time I knew it wasn’t anger that was making his voice terse, “if you do not put some clothes on soon, I can promise you that you won’t leave this room with your virtue intact.”'

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keep it up.

you are an amazing author.