Very nice very real. This is really coming along.

this is really good

haha he still didnt see her tattoo :D i find it so funny that she has witch birth control _ omg you need to talk about damien and kate more! or have more kissy kissy scenes with callum and marla at least :]]

Wow that was a long, interesting chappie... good work, even though you're busy...

lurved the update. I also like how they aren't having sex yet. I mean even with the whole "uber-sensitive-connection" I'm sure it would be too much for a girl like Marla to take. Someone thats always been on their own and who probably isn't used to sharing their mind with someone else or being in another's company for so long...um, if you didn't get any of that then basically: great! keep it up! lol

Yay!

Evil mother...grr...Yeah, well, she's awful, and I can't blame Marla for being totally rankled. I would too. Except hers is, well, worse than anything that could EVER happen in my little life.

But Callum's a sweetie! And not, but moreso, yes. So much sexual innuendo...and then comes the brother.

Cuddlebuddies. Love it.

Much love...TinuvielDork

i absolutely loved this chapter. i think it was the amount of M rated material and then when characters come to a realization that you've been so frustrated over for a few chapters. just lovely. :) i love being able to read your writing and just feel what the characters are feeling, like going the through what they're feeling-being in the story as they are. can't wait for the next chapter and i hope school and work don't get too bad for you! cus i definately know how that goes...laundry too! lol

~nicole

Aw, that chapter was so cute! Mostly the ending. I really love the interactions with Callum and Marla. I did kind of think the thing with her mother was a little out there, and that justin wasn't really surprised was kind of weird. What is justin's power, by the way? Anyways, great chapter. I understand about it taking so long to update. It's midterm week for me, oh what fun. College and work leaves no time for a novel. I'm finding that out with my own. Well, I hope you finish the next chapter whenever you can and that it is soon!

Hehehe. The pink pjs were awesome. Poor Marla. I can't imagine how confused she must be.

I can't help it I miss Kate. . .not that Marla isn't interesting but she seems a little cliche.

Awesome, awesome chapter.

Jeez, her mom isn't just a little bit mental, is she? What a nut... Er. She isn't going to suddenly turn into a spastic psycho killer and disrupt their happiness, fragile as it is, is she? Because I have this feeling that she is...

Gah! Marla's mother is a bitch. Can't wait to see her expression when she finds out that Marla and Callum are Joined. She is gonna be miffed...

Update soon! :)

Oh I love this story! Callum and Marla are two very strong chracters and I adore them!

Keep up the fantastic writing!

rereading the story/

I like the part about "no I'm not into Wicca or Voodoo, if anything I'm a Catholic,"-haha.

I can't get over Marla's spunk. It's awesome and I definitely admire her ability to spit out sassy/witty/demeaning come backs like *snap* that.

I was thinking, please don't tell me the concert pianist Wolfgang feel for was Marla's mother. We don't know much about her yet but if she might have Marla's power she could very well have traooed Callum in the tree. Oh dear, this could get messy.

Callum does that holding her against him thing a lot. She needs to stomp on his foot one time or swing the back of her head back hard to hit him (if she won't get hurt too bad, 'sides he can heal himself). She's not submissize in any sense of the word but she might need to show him in some way physically ('sides kissing) that she's his equal.

Again, please update. You're killing me Smalls!

Gosh, I'm itching to know Kate's opinion on Marla.