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![]() ![]() ![]() I liked your other story, so I am trying this one. I liked Marla and Justin. I am wondering about Marla and her green... |
![]() ![]() I would love for you to do a Calc-Jessica romance! I know I'm just "another fan" begging for this, but I would really enjoy it and to see their characters expanded in a different way would be SO MUCH fun. Awesome writings by the way! ALIS |
![]() ![]() ![]() Marla is definitely annoying in my book, Callum is a God to be able to take her. I probably would pull my hair out already and tell her to shove it. Nonetheless, I love all your stories and seeing that you mention that this is part of your trilogy, I was hoping for you to write more stories in the future! Please do :[ |
![]() ![]() ![]() MAn that was one hot story my insides are now in very fluterry condition you really write awsome tell me you'll write more stories pretty please |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was so sad to reach the end of the story! I was literally addicted! Marla is AMAZING and Callum , omg Callum he is a god. WOW! I Love your writing it is really good and you are incredibly creative! I am on my way to read your third story which I am sure is as good if not better than this and TVW! However I really want you to write a new story, something maybe about a vampire female Joining with a non-vampire male like human or something and it would be as though it is something really rare and she would change him into a vamp or something! That would be cool xD! Anyways now I am off to your third story and I really hope you would write a new one! You Rock :P |
![]() ![]() fucking brill :) loved it! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() MY BROTHER AND I REFER TO THEM AS ARMSOCKS ALSO! Even if they aren't made of socks. That made my day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() All right. I have read all three of your stories now, and I definitely think it needs to be a quartet ... or quintet ... or septet ... anyway ... I think you get the point. Perhaps a loup? June doesn't EXACTLY count as one, after all. Or, say, what's Marguerite's story? Or, what would happen if a human, non-witch character got involved? (Besides Jess, although she def. needs her own story, too.) Or what about a couple that ISN'T Joined, but still manages to be good together? See what I mean? So many potential spin-offs. Anyway, I enjoy the French in certain of your stories as well as the humor. I am kind of curious about Marla's dad. He takes it pretty darn well ... too well, almost. Regardless, hope to see a "New Story" alert in the inbox soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just have one comment: Loup is French, and the "p" wouldn't be pronounced. It would be "Loo", not "Loop". Because Marla repeated "Loups" as "Loops", but it shouldn't be pronounced like that. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I just loved The V Word and then you come out with this.. great story. I loved it, although, Marla was a bit.. I'm not sure what word for her, but she was a bit much for me to understand? All I know is I didn't like her character very much, but it did make the story interesting. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE'D IT! Awesome story! It was really good |
![]() ![]() You are now my favorite online author. Some places falter a bit, like in V-word, you used vampirette to much, but the plot and characters totally make up for it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHAHHA., i LOVE your stories. They amuse me very very much. ) Whens the next sequel coming out? |