Aww such a cute chapter. I love how your male characters always have nicknames for their lovers (Damien had querida and Callum has little one). It was such a sweet chapter and I think I like this story even more than your last one!

Yay kate and damien make an appearance!

Birthmarks on Marla's arms...just geting a hunch here but is she a witch? Were those the ones in your last stories with the funny marks? Oh, and is she ever going to meet calc so she can kick him in the shins? Hahaha

Loved the chapter!

I know this is random. But if you ever do end up reading this, I want to say: Holy jeezus. I've just finished reading a horrible online vampire story (not to be a huge jerk). I forgot all about cringing but then skimming through this yet again gave me an interesting and obvious insight besides the non horribleness of your stuff. You're truly incredible at writing them. So that must mean you can write near anything. This was never cheesy, or too lovey dovey over the top. I just wanted to let you know this. It was realistic besides the whole reading mind, vampire stuff of course. But it was well thought out and personally I'm just glad I didn't have to read another horrible "steamy" scene. You have a talent. At least if you fail at everything you can write near porno books. And make them classy and not trashy earning hundreds of 20 dollar bills. If only. I feel like a loser now. :P Keep on thinkin up different stuff and I'll maybe, most likely read. Maybe. J.k sort of.

wow i actually think that was slightly better than 'The 'V' Word' but in a kinda different way of course.. i love it.

and ha i think you have this think with making stories 20 chapters long.. yeah i know 'the 'V' word' technically has 21 but it had a prologue so.. yeah

While I enjoy this, and your other stories immensely, I just wanted to point out a slight problem at the beginning of this chapter. There you have Marla sleeping in her contacts and then putting her glasses on. Personally, I think that would hinder eyesight, rather that help it. I hope that you will consider writing another story in this world, I thoroughly enjoyed all three, and would love to see more.

I really liked your story. It was one of the most thought out story lines, and didn't miss hardly any detail. I think you did very well in spelling and grammer; mostly becouse it seems to me that some people can't spell around here. Yours was one of my favorite stories I have read so far (and beleive me, I have no life, so I have read quite a few). I very much enjoyed it, so I want to say thank you for doing so well. (mostly becouse again, I have no life, so having something so well to entertain myself with was really great.) I am going to go and read another one of your stories and see if it is holds the same quality.

Thank you for the good read,

Jessica Cantrell

You spelled practice wrong. I don't know why but lately I've been seeing alot of people use practise like its practice so I just had to say something. Normally these things don't bug me so much. Wait I just looked it up in my handy widget dictionary and apparently thats the way the Brits spell it...so it bugs me less now i guess but there's still a little niggling in the back of my brain. I guess I'll just have to ignore it.

sigh, your writiing never ceases to amaze me XD

sigh, oh and if you want to know the history of 'the finger' came from I'm willing to share

but i wont bore u with it if u dont want to kno XD

Dana

While it is true that this story is eerily similar to the story Christine Feehan writes, you're only posting on fictionpress. I would be worried if you were trying to publish this. Then, you might want to go back through and change some things. Once again, a wonderful story here.

I wonder why you did not start at the beginning of the alphabet, of what I'm beginning to call your alphabet series. then, I would have 26 stories to read and that would be wonderful. Your heroines are refreshing and hilarious, and your men are, of course, delicious.

Keep writing!

My God, that was amazing! My favourite of the three (i think i read them in the wrong order :D) Great chemistry between Callum and Marla and well-written sex scenes :)

Haha, my computer whacked out, and I had to come back to make my review, but I don't remember what chapter I was on [ sadness [

but anyways!

aww, I love sherrilyn kenyon! Yay for good authors! Yourself included! D

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Oh my GOD!

This was like the best story ever!

There are no words to express how much I loved Callum and Marla.

Oh, and Justin and Marla's interactions?

Freakin' hilarious.

Alanna was sweet.

Have to go read sequel.

this was really awesome!

great story! If you write another I'm for sure reading it. (Did that make sense?) Any way, you;re on my author alert list! Good job :)