WOW. o_o In a completely good way! That was one of the hottest scenes I have ever read on fictionpress. *fans herself* you're good. like really good XD period.

I was right, you write amazingly. Now i am off to look to see if you have written Justin's story or something like that!

yippe

love your style.

I love christian feehan she is the best writer ever. I have read as many of her books as I can get my hands on but there are not many about so I have to wait ages but i read the ones i can get over and over again. Love the story so far and ifit is anything like the Dark series then i will love it all the way

You've heard it before but fantastic! Fantastic! Fantastic!

A million percent on any shitty paperback I've read (quite a few...)

so I'm pretty much the most retarded reader ever to grace FP. I seriously didn't even make the Calc- Jess connection until I read your little A/N at the beginning of this chapter. And I just read "Xnay" like three days ago. Like I said, a little retarded. And I loved the June reference as well. And Wolf is one of her bros, is he not? I might have to go back and skim it while I wait for your next update.

Btw, Great stories! I really like them! :) sorry that I'm not being more constructive in explaining WHY I like them, but I'm lazy and don't feel like it. sorry :/ Anywho, loved it. can't wait for more! :)

hahaha. that SUCKS.

and this does remind me a lot of the Dark books by Feehan. but not in a bad way. you're really good, actually. :)

Kate's Komputers! OMG! hahaha! love it!

and the Spanish Inquisition remark... hahahaha! Nice touch!

OMG!

Is she Calc's soulmate...?

And I love christine feehan. good to know I'm not the only one.

and dangit. I was gonna go to bed early tonight.

really enjoyed the second vamp story! this one is KINDA better on the imaginative side but the charac. of the first one are more interesting (in my opinion anyway...)

i'm sure the third is going to be the best so far keep it up ;)

this story was awesome! loved it!

Are you absofrickenlutely positive you NEVER read "Dead and Unwed" or any other books in the series? Because, Jesus Callum's last name is Sinclair. Wow how'd that name, Sinclair pop into your brain? I'm just curious, ‘tis all.

Like your first story, this one was fantastic! I definitely wasn't disappointed at all.

I think Marla is absolutely hilarious. She's so wildly different from other characters I'm use to. And I love how, as Callum put it, she lives inside of her head. The things that go through her mind make me literally laugh out loud.

Speaking of Callum, I totally, and completely adore the whole opposites attract thing in this. And it was refreshing to see that the girl was the one with the temper while the guy was the more level headed one.

I also forgot to mention in the last review how much I like your Joined idea. I read a lot of vampire books with something similar to that, but you're the only one who explains it so well. And I thought that was very unique that you involve other immortals like witches and werewolves.

Really, you're an amazing writer. I didn't even like romance, until I read The V Word. I remember actually setting time aside each day so I could read a chapter or two from that story and this one. I get so attached to characters, and find myself wishing there was more after finishing the last chapter.

I absolutely can't wait to read your third story! I'm definitely planning on reading it very soon, once things settle down.

I know I'll fall in love with the third as I did with your first two.

Oh my gosh this one was great too! I only wish that Marla would have snapped at Calc for creating Calculus but eh it was still freaking incredible!

Applause! What a lovely story, I really like how you create the characters and develop them. And Marla is such a teenage angst teen too! Wonderfully portrayed! Kuddos!

She's been such a teenager for the last several chapters. Are we really so frustrating? You do a good job of portraying that!