Reviews for Finally
damaged isolation chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
I'd say it was different too.

No really, i do like the use of the line throughout the poem, but i think you could have used it in more wise places, and connected it with the theme more effectively.

Your tone and style is fairly even and flows quite well, though look out for using too ambiguous phrases (something else?) and too poetic phrases which prove to be a little lumpy.

Overall a solid poem.