Reviews for leave me in pieces
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 6/18/2006
I like this, it reflects what I am feeling at the well done.

Keep it up.
sunshineofyourlife chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
"It's all right yeah I'll be fine don'e worry 'bout this heart of mine. Just take your love and hit the road, there's nothing you can do or say you're gonna break my heart anyway. So just leave the peices when you go."-The Wreckers

Excellent poem! and thank you for the lovely review! i apreciate every word.

-Sunshine
arc arsenal chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
i like how disorganized you made this, reflecting the confusion and panic the subject seems to be feeling. the unusual punctuation and structure really draws the reader in. really good work :)