Reviews for The Somnambulist
Geneva chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
The first stanza of this poem keeps pacing through my head. I know that really, four lines is way too short for a poem (although I guess Emily Dickinson could pull it off) but those four lines are pretty much perfect. I liked the rest, don't get me wrong (the second verse was the weakest, I thought), but the first four lines... whew. Something about the rhythm of "the somnambulist strikes a pose". I don't know.

Also, since I'm too lazy to really review much, just wanted to say that I loved Act III. Keep writing, you're really good.
Rhod chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
I liked it a lot! the dreamy tune and the rhyming pattern was really nice in an odd way.
wildwolffree17 chapter 1 . 6/19/2006
Excellent.
pplofthewrldeatcheese chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
things that make you go hmm...Thats something my dad would always say and it fits the poem perfectly, it's very odd BUT in a good way, it definately makes you think volumes about what you are writing. I liked the rhyming pattern alot, it fit the poem.