Reviews for Focus
pink.puff chapter 3 . 6/22/2006
Loved the last focus... I just keept laughing I had the same addiction with The Sims, which I still play (fortunatly not as much!)... :X
pink.puff chapter 2 . 6/21/2006
Really funny! The last focus was 'memorable', I bet!I had a sort of episode just like that one once...
superheroesarereal chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
I don't really know why, but this is awesome and it made me smile. ) Except...I don't really know what you were saying at the end:"...me what a fine young lady I ON! I wasn't even dressed like a maid that day!" Other than that, this rocks. )