Reviews for Oh Twisted Suicide
Complex chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
Woot! i luvs it...i got goosebumps readn it but im not sure if its coz of da poem or bcuz stupid spring isnt here yet grr! nehu..once again i emo heart it...but when u gna start writn sum fiction pieces hm?
When Twilight Fades chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
Yay, cool twist! So amazing! The rhythm and everything! *giggle* I love it love it love it! ...Even though it's not exactly the happiest poem in the world... and yet I found humor in it somehow... hmm...

:.:Nyoko-chan:.:
poemkitten7 chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
Omg, awesome twist at the end. Although it's really sad. :( When she was stepping away I was like, "Yay, so she's not going to die!" And then bam, she just has to trip and fall. Aw, well. It makes the ending a lot better this way. D Great job. *adds to favs* Keep writing. :)
kay.m.sea chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
i liked the twist! so random, but interesting.

-kay-
West Wind of Fire chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
Mhm, very good word choice, if I may say. Excellent rhythm, also. Not the happiest topic of earth, but it was lovely written. ) Sorry I don't have much to say, but there's not much to criticize, after all, the topic is the topic and it's beautifully written.