Reviews for Perfection
marauder's maudlin chapter 1 . 9/5/2006
I like this poem/story format. It makes it much more interesting to read. This is fantastic.
inkfish chapter 1 . 6/18/2006
gahhalkhj;galkhg a;ksjf.

you are awsome. no, really.

you are totally kicking ass with this.

and now i really want to know waht it is!

...and i know you're not gonna tell me.

evil!
tamarkaph2006 chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
This is really awesome. I think the first line is really a "hook". The whole thing is powerful though. AWESOME!