|Reviews for Perfection|
| marauder's maudlin chapter 1 . 9/5/2006
I like this poem/story format. It makes it much more interesting to read. This is fantastic.
| inkfish chapter 1 . 6/18/2006
you are awsome. no, really.
you are totally kicking ass with this.
and now i really want to know waht it is!
...and i know you're not gonna tell me.
| tamarkaph2006 chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
This is really awesome. I think the first line is really a "hook". The whole thing is powerful though. AWESOME!