Reviews for Pathetic Obsessive Girls Anonymous |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! She's a quick-thinking girl - much better at it than I'd ever be. I recently told a hot drummer he was "free to go" 'cause I didn't want him to feel obligated to stay. ;) He went, all right, and I haven't talked to him since. Damn. Hehe. And Van is a massive sweetie! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! I guess it's obvious your story is popular, 'cause of all your reviews. It probably has to do with you too and how you are generous with reviewing. :) I kind of like devoting my reviews to people who don't have many already, but...I can't help myself! I love a good love story (I'm single, gotta get my kicks somehow *lol*) and so I am determined to keep reading your story, 'cause I really enjoyed this first chapter. Your sense of humour is great - love your characters! Your dialogue is really strong. And I'm always in the mood for reading about hotties. :) I don't really like boy bands, don't know F4, but that's cool - I like boys and I like stories :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heyy! It's nice to see some almost-fanfiction about F4 (it took me all of 10 minutes by the 1st chapter to figure out that it was them, hehe). Your Mandarin pronunciation - or, the phrases you know, anyway xDD, from what I could see (I'm Chinese, can you tell already? haha) - is really good. I haven't even seen half those Chinese dramas you own. Keep improving on it! Plus, I liked your eloquent, yet somehow still cute and Chinese-sappy-drama-y, writing style. I really enjoyed the journey this story took us on. And through my whole random review which probably makes no sense to anyone except you since you're random too, I just want to say thanks for the quality fiction . |
![]() ![]() ![]() It kinda reminds me of some of the stuff my friends and I started. Luckily, the Skindo-Lele never got out of hand. ) I'll keep reading tomorrow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tee-hee-hee! That was the best story EVER! Certainly the best I've EVER EVER seen on fictionpress! Excuse me while I go have a giggling fit (yes, I am that big of a dweeb). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rockin' story! I love how it's about Asians, something different for a change. Man, they're going to have such cute kids! Half Asian-White kids have a freakishly high rate of being good looking, according to my personal experiences. Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AHRG! I know what's going to happen (...possibly...) and it's killing me! I ADORE this story, btw. I haven't had to worry about inappropriateness or anything, and the whole spoon-and-bible thing tickles my fancy... Van's a sweetie! |
![]() ![]() Honestly, I really love this. I usually don't review things until I read the whole thing, but I felt the need to point out... Saying "Ken" was a slip of the tongue, right? Because it made me laugh! :) Great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay! I'm all done! And I really really liked it. It's well written, had good plot twists, wasn't generic. I liked it a lot. The proposal was TOO DIE FOR! lol. Great way to end it! :) Every story can be made better, but this was good and I enjoyed reading it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So ... I thought they were in HER room, since they were listening to her laptop and music, etc ... but now they are in HIS room (since she doesn't have a toothbrush, hairbrush, and Kyle joining them and not looking to happy to see her) ... just thought I'd comment on that. Maybe I missed something. Also ... way earlier ... when they got to Singapore ... I'm not sure I recollect you mentioning WHERE they were going or WHERE they were until like chapters/scenes into it. Same with where they are now (they got on a plane and travelled again) ... I have no clue what country/city they are in. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like that you made them Christians ... is it going to play a big role in the story? And are they like serious Christians? Or just sort of nonchalant ones? Not that it matters, I guess... and you're done with the story, so I guess I'll find out. But I guess it adds some depth to the story. And helps develop the characters. As far as their motives for things they do, their choices, etc. But yeah, I think seeing stories with Christians.. not enough of them. That are mainstream anyway. |
![]() ![]() okay well your story looked interesting and stuff so im reading it now and i just had to stop to say, i almost died when i read the title of the chapeter...it says Blogs, Jobs, and Taiwanese Celebrities but when i just glanced at the title i thought it said "blow jobs"...lmao...i was scared because i had read the first little pararagh before i really looked at the title and it said how Amsden gave her a ride home...omg you have no ideo want went y through mind..i just thought that was funny so i thought i would say...ok well i luv this story so far its pretty awsome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I really like your story, I saw it on the SKOW awards website and voted for it. Anyways what band is B4 based on? |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol. i like the prologue, it gets you curious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. I have neglected writing this review for so long, but it must be done. You simply cannot go on w/out knowing how much i adore this story. The whole thing was so well developed that I feel compelled to stand and applaud. *stands and applauds* poor amy. he'll never have her. But Van will. Yay His proposal was so sweet.I was at my computer squealing the entire time. I wish I could meet, fall in love with and marry my celebrity crush. Stupid Hollywood and their dumb protocol. Alas I am not that lucky. As I've said before I loved the whole spiritual aspect of it. Especially when he asked her to spen QT with him. I was "aww"ing the entire chapter. And soul kissing. Aw. I was so sad when they broke up and she was all sad and Amy tried to date her and stuff, but she still missed Van. It was so nice of him to get them back together. And what Renee did with his mother was genius. I'd have been scared out ofmy mind. So in conclusion I thoroughly enjoyed this story and hope to see the sequel soon *hint-hint* lol. |