I just got back from the beach...and that WAS SO SWEET! I had shed a couple of tears. It was so darling! You can't be finished yet! You have to have an epilogue for the wedding or wedding night. *wiggles eyebrows* Anyways I loved this story and even though it's done I'm going to add it to my favorites!tootles!

PS please tell me you answer by emailing me! thanx!

"Like all good stories, they must sometime come to an end." However, I choose to say goodnight, and not goodbye. And "Hulo Ams!" :D (love ya too)

NO, she's lost the spoon! No no no no no no!

I bet Van's stolen it. Hehe.

Okay, i really gotta go now. Like, really really.

Awesome chapter. Please update soon soon soon! :D :D

I mean, it will be four whole days by tomorrow morning! *Pouts*

Please update! (And sorry for the weak reviews, it's very very late and I've been travelling all day. :D)

Keep writing!

"Noggin" is the most awesome word ever.

Ooh, I agree, passive aggressive is fun. :D Well, it is for me.

Hehe.

"There is something vastly unnerving about two supposedly psychic cats in doll bonnets watching you argue with your boyfriend." Hahahahaha.

Aw, cute (the ending.)

I have to say, I agree with Van. They do seem to go from issue to issue, in Renee's eyes.

(I'm resenting having to leave this review when I could be reading, you know. Only kidding.)

It's as if, either, she's not happy and feels that their relationship can always be improved, OR that relationships do need to be like that.

I have to agree with Van a bit. She's taking it too seriously.

Bear in mind that I'm 17, and I don't do serious relationships. I suppose that might bias me a little.

One more chapter. Hehe.

Franko's awesome. And he talks SO american! It rocks! :D :D :D

"SPAIDS" I think I just peed my pants.

"He was biting his lip softly now" Hehe. Sorry.

That was beautiful. The whole love bit. I had a huge grin on my face too.

Aw, I love Van!

Okay, I have to read ONE more chapter. Just one.

I'm back! And I didn't even bother going through my author alerts (when you have more than a hundred emails, it's a bit overwhelming) and I am going to read at least one chapter before I go to bed. Hehe.

Lovely analysis of Peter - I love that. Concise, yet very very telling. Telling isn't the word I want, but it will do. :D

"Until today, until Vannuys, no one had dared believe that I was trying to break out." I'm in love. That was perfection.

Oh, the deleting the picture thing - again, beautiful detail. Lovely (I know it's obvious, but it's still) symbolism.

Now I'm trying to work out if that last sentence made sense.

Hey, random thought: Did you know that when my cat Diamond is in heat, if you yell out spoons, she mews and does this running in place thing with her butt in the air?ANYwho, I loved the chappie, dearest. Van is such a goofball, but alas, his adorableness makes me I'm too lazy to put you on "author alerts" so I'll just continue my meticulous (and hardly tedious) story-stalking. Hem,hem. Don't I just sound so importantly business-like? ANYwho, I love you and I love your story.

Your story stalker,

Rachelle

This story is amazing. Just from this, you have gotten me obsessed with Vanness et al. I'd be surprised if I was the only one. Keep it up! I love it!

me love it! me still hate van, lots.

update soon

is he plainning to propose, soon?

Arrgh, I've missed a lot but I can say I am perfectly happy that I waited. I got to read five chapters in one sitting. So worth it. Needless to say, I've got to say I'm still lovin' it and THANK YOU very much on the review to my story. I'm still working out the next chapter because it just doesn't want to come out the way I want it too. I'm terribly picky when it comes to my stories and enough about me.

Thank you so much fot the advice on the Mandarin movies/dramas. When I have time, I'll check them out.

sguketihgtr.

I've only just found your story. D: And I loves it so much.

HAH! I bet Van took it. LOL.

see, about the spoon...i ate it :but really...She lost the spoon? oh my! a sign? foreshadowing? the signal for the apocolypse to commence?1who knows?anyway, very productive chapter! moms scare me all the time too. i can totally relate (mexican girl, caucasian boy, you know)but yes, i like :)

She lost the spoon? Oh! trouble!