Hello there :)

Du-u-u-u-u-u-ude! This is so cute :)

I really like how you've written this story!

As in *ahem* :

a) when you talk about religion you're merely showing us how devoted Renee is to her religion and what it means to her and Van. You're not shoving it down our throats and preaching it to us. So a gazillion virtual cookies have been sent your way! (Yes, there are actually several stories like that on FP, they annoy me so much. :/)

b) I love the idea of POGA! And NA-W-W-W-W-W-W-W-W-W-W-W-W-W-W! They got a special mention/shout out. How awesome was that. Hah.

The girls are so cool! Love them all. I love how Chris, Dee and Renee click so well! Some people might not know how hard it is to pull off with out ... well, appearing to be try-hards ;) They are so well in synch. I thought how they mentioned that they shared the same brain was cute. Because there are people out there that are *that* tight. :)

c)I love how it's not some fan fiction with some teenage girl stalking the latest celebrity/musician/fictional character. More cookies for you!

It's actually really cute how all the meetings between Van and Renee were set out.

They were not shamelessly flirting/promiscuous. (‘Cos apparently that’s the only way you can guys *cough*/ sarcasm) They were themselves and that’s really admirable/adorable.

Their relationship is like innocent/pure – you know all though they haven’t known each other for ages, you can tell they care about each other.

I like that he's not some stuck up, arrogant rich celeb; which is how a lot of people try and portray celebs as. But really, they *are* people just like you and me; therefore they deserve to be treated normally :)

And the fact that they are older makes this seem a little more realistic :D

Question for you! How old is Van? I'm guessing he is a fictional character- I googled some of the other names of celebs mentioned in this story and recognised...one XD Haha. Apparently I suck with Asian idols. But I make it up with my anime/ manga reading. Haha.

I honestly can't wait to see the next chapter :) Happy writing!

x reeka

Was rather worried for them when they started sharing about the day's events that they might forget to do their QT. :O

Singapore? Eh, Sentosa. The zoo's fine, the bird park is fun if you know where to go. Singapore won't take long to tour around (it's a teeny tiny dot on the map), but if you bring your friends along it'll be fun...I think?

Loved it, update soon!

Cute!) LOL.

ASIAN!) AWESOME STORY! Hehe. Van's such a cutie and Kyle too!) Update soon?

Whoa. A lot of tension. I really love the Renee/Vannuys interaction. Great job!

Oh, Finally. It was torturous watching them dance around each other at the beginning of the chapter (or since last chapter). That was so sweet.

OH MAN. I PICKED SUCH A BAD TIME TO WANT TO REREAD THIS FIC. Waiting between chapters is absolutely killing me, knowing that if I'd have decided to reread this a month or so or whatever ago, I'd still have access to THE WHOLE THING. Lol.

That said, my dying over it is a good thing on your part. Your writing is so much fun to read, I'd forgotten how hilariously funny you are. Your jokes are so subtle and natural - the writing itself just effortlessly intertwines with your sense of humor, so it doesn't read as forced or tryhard.

You also have a way with portraying those moments of tension and awkwardness that's a little bit quirky and overall is just really enthralling. I'm not super pro on the religious aspects, just a personal thing on my part and I don't hold it against you or your story, but usually I avoid reading stories that involve religion. You are my exception to that rule though. While every now and then it does disconnect me from the story, for the most part, I adore your writing enough that it doesn't bother me like it usually does.

You, especially in this fic, clearly understand what readers want from stories on FP. For all the silliness of the plot, you know how to weave a good story that is completely enjoyable to read from start to finish. You shamelessly focus in on the guilty pleasure OMGFANGIRLSQUEAL fluff parts, lol, but still manage to write with an intelligence and wit that is tragically rare on FP.

So yeah. I AM EXCITED FOR MORE CHAPTERS TO BE UPLOADED. Clearly. I swear I'll be less vague in my next review and focus in more on the actual plot, characters and such, rofl.

I. Like. This. Chapter. Very muchly. There's the gentleness from Van, the irritation on Renee's part, and the Tension.

Hmm, how disappointing that Renee was unable to savour sleeping on the same bed with her idol.

Loved it, update soon!

Haha ... this story is fun on so many levels. I hope you keep putting up more chapters cause you've got me hooked. Will all the POGA girls be going or just Renee?

I also appreciate the Quiet Time bits. It's nice to see a little bit of faith interspersed with a story for once.

Anyway, keep it up!

Go! Definitely go with B4 (with the others though. Wouldn't be as fun without crazy dee and Chris). Anyway, fantastic!

Tsk tsk, what have Chris and Kyle been up to when left alone? Hmm...

Your portrayal of Van is just so sweet and cute :D

Loved it, update soon!

Loved it, update soon!