|Reviews for The Champagne Gang|
| AlysonSerenaStone chapter 1 . 3/6
I really like your opening chapter! I am very drawn to the idea of a scholarship kid going to a wealthy private school. I also like your characters. Great work and I can't wait to read more!
| Anon chapter 22 . 3/1
No it can't finish here! You got to write a sequel! I mean, like when they are all older and they all meet again, and like when Eve and Michael are together, and Rozy and Nathan are together, and all and all!
Honestly I loved Summer at the begining, but then I just couldn't stand her when she was with Zack. I don't know, I just couldn't stand her anymore.
But, anyways, great fiction!
| XxEllexX chapter 22 . 2/16
It's 2:38 am and I am completely breath taken and blown away by the sheer intellect, wit, and perfect imperfection that you call am piece of writing. I call it the best damn thing I've read in a lonnnnnnnnnggggg while. I think this is perhaps my favourite story ever. Ever. Can you publish this so I can buy 20 copies and stuff it down my friend's throats? No. Seriously. Your voice and the strong development of your characters is so raw and believable and as cheesy as you may have found your work to be, I found it to be entirely void on cliches. You did brilliantly, keeping the suspense and drama. Literally right when I thought I was certain on one thing, the next paragraph or next chapter just pulls the carpet right under me like LOL jokes! How you do what you do? I have no clue. But I hope, and maybe I'll even pray, to one day be able to write something a clever, captivating, and absolutely wonderful as you. I think your clever mind and unique perspective is what makes your narrative so I had originally rooted for Nathan, and then Zach, and then Nathan again, and though I still see Zach as a slightly unstable and dangerous character in real life... Your story is perfect for just that. The perfect imperfections of the characters themselves. Because nobody is perfect. And nothing in life is perfect. And god damnit reading your fic makes me somehow feel more educated and inspired, I don't even know what you've done, you crazy awesome writer. Yesterday I even pulled an all nighter when I had an important exam the following morning, and today I even missed my bus stop because I was too engrossed in your story. Please never stop writing. Because it's your gift. I hope you read this and take my words to heart, because they are coming from my heart.
| Guest chapter 23 . 12/17/2013
THIS IS NOT A STORY, THIS IS ART.
| DeEpeR than FaThOmLeSs chapter 22 . 12/15/2013
I must admit, I am not a romantic - I certainly do sound hypocritical since I generally read T-rated romance. None of that porno - but I love this story! I internally puked by the cheesiness of this chapter, but I managed to survive! ;D
You are an talented writer! I am jealous - no, I am not. I am not the jealous type: I envy your amazing abilities! Your character development, style, voice, the plot was top-notch.
You are a diamond in the rough,
Deeper than Fathomless
| DeEpeR than FaThOmLeSs chapter 21 . 12/15/2013
| DeEpeR than FaThOmLeSs chapter 18 . 12/15/2013
This is the craziest story I have ever read.
| DeEpeR than FaThOmLeSs chapter 16 . 12/15/2013
This is absolutely awful. I wish I were more emotional so I could cry for Summer.
| DeEpeR than FaThOmLeSs chapter 7 . 12/15/2013
I checked out your profile...I see you haven't written in a few years. What gives? You're an amazing writer. Man, if I had your skill, I'd probably update every week.
This chapter was slower compared to the six chapters I have read, but it picked up quiet fast at the end. I love how smoothly your words flow, the uniqueness of each character's voice, your vast vocabulary. I love it all.
Would you print me a hard copy if I paid you?
| DeEpeR than FaThOmLeSs chapter 6 . 12/15/2013
Wow, so epic. I wish I could create such a wonderful plot, great conversations between the characters- can I have a hard copy? I'll just buy this book. I won't have to carry my laptop around with me.
It's 3:30AM, and I am trying to decided whether I should continue reading or stop for the morning. lol
| DeEpeR than FaThOmLeSs chapter 4 . 12/14/2013
I see why she has grown slightly closer to Nathan, because she has no one to speak to. Her parents and older siblings are all too caught up in their own lives, instead of taking responsibility. It sickens me to even consider for a brief moment that people can't push aside their feelings to support their loved one. It's absolutely frustrating.
Nice done! You have a way with words.
| DeEpeR than FaThOmLeSs chapter 3 . 12/14/2013
I must be a slow reader! It takes me 35min to read these chapters!
As many of the character's have stated, Summer is honestly playing with fire. She is warming up to Nathan - a vile, pig who will do anything to win - and Roxanne is dangerous. Gosh, I can't imagine what the next chapters are loaded with.
Great job at character development! You also have a creative plot!
| DeEpeR than FaThOmLeSs chapter 2 . 12/14/2013
Wow, what a stressful day! I would not be able to last an hour in her shoes.
Even though you have revealed that Chris is "good-natured" through description and his own words, I would never trust him. He talks too much, as my grandmother would say. His interest in Summer is also slightly odd, because we would assume him to be rather faithful to his girlfriend. I might be over-analyzing the relationship, but what else am I to do?
PS: Summer needs to ditch that a-whole!
| DeEpeR than FaThOmLeSs chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
Your words flow well, and your word choice is superb. The description of the office and student's appearance was very interesting to read. It makes me wonder whether this is based on a true story. I have never attended a high-end high school, but this sounds believable: the snotty, filthy-rich attitude in the character's voices are authentic. The chapter was quiet long but I enjoyed it.
I can't wait to read more!
| WitchIce chapter 22 . 12/6/2013
That was.. WOAH. Amazing. Wonderful. The best story on this site. WOAH.