Reviews for The Champagne Gang
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 22 . 3/26/2014
I really did like this final chapter! I am so glad that she ended up with Zach; although I was afraid that she wouldn't end up with anyone. This is one of my favourite stories on fictionpress. Well written and who cares if it's cliche?! Great work and off to read the one shots!
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 18 . 3/23/2014
I really like your dialogue in this chapter! I think you write everyone every realistically! I can't wait for the next chapter!
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 11 . 3/16/2014
I really do hope she ends up with Zach! I like him so much better than Nathan! I can't wait to read more!
Nadine chapter 22 . 3/15/2014
Man, this story was great. Seriously... I think the only story I've read that could RIVAL this is Soul watch. ( s/3149780/1/Soul-Watch ) Seriously people! Go read it!
Great story, it'll be in mind for a long time.
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 6 . 3/11/2014
Even though he's a jerk, I can't help but love Zach. Plus, he and Summer have some great chemistry! I really am enjoying this story and I can't wait to read the rest of it!
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
I really like your opening chapter! I am very drawn to the idea of a scholarship kid going to a wealthy private school. I also like your characters. Great work and I can't wait to read more!
Anon chapter 22 . 3/1/2014
WHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTT!
No it can't finish here! You got to write a sequel! I mean, like when they are all older and they all meet again, and like when Eve and Michael are together, and Rozy and Nathan are together, and all and all!
Honestly I loved Summer at the begining, but then I just couldn't stand her when she was with Zack. I don't know, I just couldn't stand her anymore.
But, anyways, great fiction!
XxEllexX chapter 22 . 2/16/2014
It's 2:38 am and I am completely breath taken and blown away by the sheer intellect, wit, and perfect imperfection that you call am piece of writing. I call it the best damn thing I've read in a lonnnnnnnnnggggg while. I think this is perhaps my favourite story ever. Ever. Can you publish this so I can buy 20 copies and stuff it down my friend's throats? No. Seriously. Your voice and the strong development of your characters is so raw and believable and as cheesy as you may have found your work to be, I found it to be entirely void on cliches. You did brilliantly, keeping the suspense and drama. Literally right when I thought I was certain on one thing, the next paragraph or next chapter just pulls the carpet right under me like LOL jokes! How you do what you do? I have no clue. But I hope, and maybe I'll even pray, to one day be able to write something a clever, captivating, and absolutely wonderful as you. I think your clever mind and unique perspective is what makes your narrative so I had originally rooted for Nathan, and then Zach, and then Nathan again, and though I still see Zach as a slightly unstable and dangerous character in real life... Your story is perfect for just that. The perfect imperfections of the characters themselves. Because nobody is perfect. And nothing in life is perfect. And god damnit reading your fic makes me somehow feel more educated and inspired, I don't even know what you've done, you crazy awesome writer. Yesterday I even pulled an all nighter when I had an important exam the following morning, and today I even missed my bus stop because I was too engrossed in your story. Please never stop writing. Because it's your gift. I hope you read this and take my words to heart, because they are coming from my heart.
Guest chapter 23 . 12/17/2013
THIS IS NOT A STORY, THIS IS ART.
Deeper than Fathomless chapter 22 . 12/15/2013
I must admit, I am not a romantic - I certainly do sound hypocritical since I generally read T-rated romance. None of that porno - but I love this story! I internally puked by the cheesiness of this chapter, but I managed to survive! ;D

You are an talented writer! I am jealous - no, I am not. I am not the jealous type: I envy your amazing abilities! Your character development, style, voice, the plot was top-notch.

You are a diamond in the rough,

Deeper than Fathomless
Deeper than Fathomless chapter 21 . 12/15/2013
Incredible.
Deeper than Fathomless chapter 18 . 12/15/2013
This is the craziest story I have ever read.
Deeper than Fathomless chapter 16 . 12/15/2013
This is absolutely awful. I wish I were more emotional so I could cry for Summer.
Deeper than Fathomless chapter 7 . 12/15/2013
I checked out your profile...I see you haven't written in a few years. What gives? You're an amazing writer. Man, if I had your skill, I'd probably update every week.

This chapter was slower compared to the six chapters I have read, but it picked up quiet fast at the end. I love how smoothly your words flow, the uniqueness of each character's voice, your vast vocabulary. I love it all.

Would you print me a hard copy if I paid you?

DTF
Deeper than Fathomless chapter 6 . 12/15/2013
Wow, so epic. I wish I could create such a wonderful plot, great conversations between the characters- can I have a hard copy? I'll just buy this book. I won't have to carry my laptop around with me.

It's 3:30AM, and I am trying to decided whether I should continue reading or stop for the morning. lol

DTF
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