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Oh my gosh, that was AWESOME! I absolutely love this story. :D the characters were amazing (I sympathize with Brian and Angela cracks me upXD) plus the plot had me hooked. Very well done :3

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Oh no. Poor Brian. He really doesn't deserve that. But I can't say I like Nathan, so...

But poor Brian ( I mean.. agh. No. Poor guy.

Ahah. I forget they're not real -

Nice story.

thank you for the story its is one of the best stories on this site. and yes i understand about crazy weeks mine just seem to be a little more than little crazy and more really fucking big crazy lol

*gulp* wow. This story - and that chapter - are very intense. I'm pleased that i found it. I'm not usually intot he whole "suspense" thing, but you do it in such a way that even someone with me - who has the attention span of a gold fish - comes back for more.

I really hope that there will be more for this story later on - make that soon.

Until next time,

!T_T!

the chapter was very good. however, one thing stuck out to me.

Dinner was spelled wrong. It was spelled like 'Diner'.

But jeez, you are incredibly discriptive. I like the story a lot.

. i'm sorry your sick and tired...but i'm really super happy you updated!

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oh my gosh i'm so excited you updated! . i just thought i'd tell you...know i'm going to go read the chapter . *runs off to read*

Whoa. Awesome two chapters. Sorry I took so long to read them. I have summer school so it kind of takes up my time... T_T

Anyway. The plot's building up and I can't wait for the part where he goes to find Brian! I really liked the part where he saw himself through Brian's eyes. That was nice. )

On to Sonia's house!

Angela's a pretty cool character (I'm not just saying that cause we have the same name), I mean who else would beat some guy up and be waiting with a cool stance afterwards. Haha.

Can't wait for the next chapters.

p.s. I tried to understand the French part, but no go. I need to learn some more. Haha.

Thanks for writing some more. )

. yay! hehe can't wait for the next one...and i'm glad i made your day! today you made mine! i had such a bad day and then i got home and was like yay Kilian updated and all ws better!

i can't wait for the next chapter!. i'm excited to see what's happening with everyone! ... I wish i could right a better review but i'm stupid and not good with words...hehe -.-' sorry

Omgsh. The story got so much more complicated and interesting! I love these last few chapters... And heheheh at the scene with Brian and Nathan... why'd Brian stop? XD Anyway... you could tell he regretted it last chapter. It sucks that he's stuck in that house now. (

I hope there's some twist where he develops his power or something and finds that he can break through her barrier!

Nathan's so much more developed and interesting now, before he was just kinda there. I love him now!

Angela's a cool character! ANGELA'S MY NAME TOO! HEEHEE! lol

Cannot wait for the next chapter! So much excitment it will bring! )

p.s you still say that "felt" is "fell" at times. don't forget that next chapter. ]

Hello! Bonjour! Sorry for not reviewing for so long but I was just so into it! I like this story, it's a nice idea. the fire starters, telekinetics and mind readers and whatnot... I like! And Brian's cool! He's emotionless most of the time but he's still cool! I can't wait to find out more about Nathan!

Hey did you notice... you changed the spelling of Brian's name from the beginning at first you spelled it Bryan now you spell it Brian... You do the same with Liam. . . the "i" and "y" thing I mean. Not that it matters, it's still an awesome story.

One more thing I think you're confusing "felt" with "fell", I thought it was a one time thing but yeah Brian kept on saying I felt on the ground..

Anyway! Good story! J'aime beaucoup! Bonne histoire, au revoir.

XD That's me trying out my français! I'll read some more now.

Je vais lire plus maintenant... haha. Does that even make sense?

Okay.. I'll stop the review now. Bye. )

um... hi! hehe i can't wait to see what happens next .

YAY! I'm so proud to be your beta! xD

The next chappie will be edited and sent to you before school starts for me... on Monday! D8